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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you see something in the chat that your character can't see or hear, but somehow they know what happened or what to do.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when a player tries to force another players character into doing something that would benefit the first players character. Kind of like controlling the other character.
    Status: Denied

Nivani was born in the forest of Caras Eldar, the Capital of the Dominion of Malin, to a middle class family. Like every dark elf, at a young age she was taught swordplay and hand to hand combat. As she grew up, she grew a curiosity to the world around her, finding magic (she doesn't know any), and the various race cultures and arts interesting. She was forced to leave her city from the war of the September prince in 1696. This caused her to move to Belvitz.


Character Name: Nivani
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 118
Physical Description: Nivani stands at about 6'0". She has long braided white hair, night sky black skin, and golden colored eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use a little bit more help.

  1. The first thing is, you have a lot of lore into your biography, but it is a little too short for my liking, I would request that you come up with more of a story and add onto it, you can keep the same lore, but just add some details.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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