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Volkmar

By Volkmar

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    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: WetPasta#8399
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: the use of irl infomation
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: making an overpowered charecter
    Status: Denied

My name is Volkmar Riser. I may be old now but trust me I can still beat the living daylights out of you and all the other youngins. I was a nice guy before everything turned south in the War of The Three Beards. I was a paladin for the Kingdom of Kaz'Ulrah and I lost some of my dearest friends, whose son now also works in this trade who I hope to repay my debt to some day for saving my life.  I started as an orphan in the city New Jornheim and was trained as a blacksmith for about 150 years until I became a well known and famous blacksmith whose fame has been forgotten in time. After a tragic forge mishap I went back to the church I was raised in to train as a man of faith. For the next hundred, or so years I worshipped the great god Yemekar to become closer to the flames and metal of creation. When my Clan left the Grand Empire of Urguan, we did so for the freedom of being our own sovereign nation.  I then fought on the front lines for my clan slowly watching fellow clansmen and friends die in front of me turning me cold inside. After watching the Orc who saved my life die in front of my eyes, I realized I didn’t know his name. That day I vowed to repay that debt. The debt to Grugmar’Undmor.  I’ve now retired back to my home town and took back up the hammer where I have been working as a small scale blacksmith shop who only accepts those I see fit.

Character Name: Volkar Rising
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 325
Physical Description: he is 4'10" and is 175 pounds. he has blue eyes and great hair and a beard. Always in smithing clothes. Is supper ripped from blacksmithing and fights
Roleplay Scenario:

“nothing to do with you youngin” I reply “ just here to hit my hammer on some things thats all” i then push past him and continue my journey

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Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your powergaming definition and your metagaming definition are very vague and do not convey the full meaning, expand them in your own words to properly show you know what you’re talking about. You can review our wiki page about them here!

Ø You cannot be a paladin, these are a order of magic-users that are completely unrelated to the Kingdom of Kaz’Ulrah, nor can your clan have it’s own sovereign nation, and finally you cannot have your own blacksmithing shop off the bat, and you cannot be a extremely talented, and famous blacksmith without any sort of RP done. Perhaps you should check out some dwarven lore? Here’s a few links;


Ø You may want to rewrite your biography to be third person rather then a first-person telling.

Ø  Your RP scenario response must be four sentences long and an action, since you have an action you do not have to worry about the former part. Please fix the length

Ø I feel like this should be noted, but when you join LOTC, you are a civilian with no sort of past feats or anything. So it wouldn’t make sense for you to be famous or well known at all. You are simply just another person in the story.

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

 You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Evonpire

Your application has been

 

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Due to:  Duplicate

 

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Evonpire#0044), my forum account, or on the server (Evonpire). You can join our discord.  You can also check out our New Player guide.

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