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Volkmar

By Volkmar

    • Rules: No
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: WetPasta#8399
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: the use of irl infomation
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: making an overpowered charecter
    Status: Denied

My name is Volkmar Riser. I may be old now but trust me I can still beat the living daylights out of you and all the other youngins. I was a nice guy before everything turned south in the War of The Three Beards. I was a paladin for the Kingdom of Kaz'Ulrah and I lost some of my dearest friends, whose son now also works in this trade who I hope to repay my debt to some day for saving my life.  I started as an orphan in the city New Jornheim and was trained as a blacksmith for about 150 years until I became a well known and famous blacksmith whose fame has been forgotten in time. After a tragic forge mishap I went back to the church I was raised in to train as a man of faith. For the next hundred, or so years I worshipped the great god Yemekar to become closer to the flames and metal of creation. When my Clan left the Grand Empire of Urguan, we did so for the freedom of being our own sovereign nation.  I then fought on the front lines for my clan slowly watching fellow clansmen and friends die in front of me turning me cold inside. After watching the Orc who saved my life die in front of my eyes, I realized I didn’t know his name. That day I vowed to repay that debt. The debt to Grugmar’Undmor.  I’ve now retired back to my home town and took back up the hammer where I have been working as a small scale blacksmith shop who only sells to those I see fit.

Character Name: Volkar Rising
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 325
Physical Description: he is 4'10" and is 175 pounds. he has blue eyes and great hair and a beard. Always in smithing clothes. Is supper ripped from blacksmithing and fight
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

  • Your backstory included the character being a Paladin which needs to be changed as you can not include anything related to magic. Bare in mind that it requires at least two direct lore references. The name of the realm is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits

 

Make sure to check out the New Player Guide, and when you have made the changes, 

feel free to contact me through discord at @mightbepan#9864 or shoot me a PM over the forums.

 If you require further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

→ Here are the changes you had to make.

 

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

  • Your backstory included the character being a Paladin which needs to be changed as you can not include anything related to magic. Bare in mind that it requires at least two direct lore references. The name of the realm is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits

You may reapply at any time.

 

If you find yourself in need of any assistance,

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