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Wiktorus1

By Wiktorus1

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Wik11111 #1081
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is refering to an character from book or film in game, knowing the lore and everything so tyou can be more accurate
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is just style of interaction to make roleplay even better
    Status: Denied

Dorin was dwarf born 40 years ago, his parents died, being killed by humans. He was rised by other dwarfs.  He didnt have any siblings. He couldnt find his place in this world so he never found any friend. He was born in Erebor. He was educated about all kind of ores, rocks etc, but the thing that was interesting to him was cartography, he could learn about far away lands and everything like this.  He was working in mine for 4 years, but then he got bored and go to an adventure. He has visited moria, sarumans tower, and a lot of great places. This time he was going to town on water, and arrived in boat. And that is where story ends

 

 

 

                                                                                                         P.S I am not from england or America and i didnt used translator i hope you appreciate this.

Character Name: Dorin
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 40
Physical Description: My character has Light brown eyes, brown hair, beard, he isnt tall but he is muscular.
Roleplay Scenario:

I am dwarf who sees humanlands for the first time, i want to live other life than my brothers i want to be a great adventurer.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to these reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Your references seem to be from Lord of the Rings, but not the lore from Lord of the Craft. Just to note: this server isn’t an LOTR server, so it has different lore. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 Furthermore, your Character Biography is almost there! You have 9 sentences. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Lastly, for Character Biography, please refrain from using a common character trope, like “parents killed by humans” or “parents killed by bandits or orcs”!

→ In regards to your Personality Traits/Quirks (Biggest Fear), you talk about a dragon your character heard about in Erebor. However, since Erebor is from Lord of the Rings, and isn’t part of the lore from Lord of the Craft, this would be invalid. I would suggest looking at the above links for more info about this!

→ Your Dislikes are a bit lacking, as you only specify one thing your character dislikes about themselves, but two are required. Please include one more thing your character dislikes about himself, and why.

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue (in quotes) and one action/emote.

→ Your skin seems to be noise shaded, and it has mismatching eyes, which doesn’t match up to the description of dwarves. I’d suggest taking a look into LOTC’s skin archive!: https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord Chenn#6807, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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