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    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using out of character information
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: where you have no say and are dragged alog
    Status: Denied

Rem was only 130 when she first picked up a sword and ventured out into the forest with her father after that Rem begged her family to let her explore the world, so when she turned 500 her family let her go explore the world and so she left home on a long journey.  she made her way to a town after traveling for a few years, and she decides to say for a while and maybe become a knight who can help and protect everyone she cares about.

Character Name: Rem
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 518
Physical Description: a snow elf who loves adventures and who is strong and courageous and is quick to help others.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thank you for taking your time to make this application but unfortunately, your application has been...

 

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Due to the fact that you haven't made an account on the forums yet,  which makes you unable to make any potential edits to your application as there were some missing points about it.

Please do make the following changes before you can make another application, you may re-apply as soon as possible:

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✦ Please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now as your examples aren't what we're currently looking out for right now.

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera.

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin.

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I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091. You can always make a ticket in game as well simply by doing /atreq if you have any questions.

 

 

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