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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i dont now
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i dont now
    Status: Denied

Hi! I was on boat looking for some nice adventure and i saw that island with this big city i knew it is my way 

Character Name: Ragnar
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: big guy with brown beard, bald lokking kinda strong
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WestCarolina

Changed Status to Pending

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

See the above pending message for the required edits!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also  /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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