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WireWolf1171
  • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: Akinori5184
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Be realistic. The character should have limitations and weaknesses. They can't do everything perfectly all the time.
    Focus on the story. Roleplay is about telling a story, not about winning or being the best.
    Be respectful of other players. Don't try to force your character's actions on other players' characters.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Keep your character in character. Don't share information that your character wouldn't know.
    Don't use out-of-character knowledge to your advantage. For example, don't use information from voice chat to help your character in a fight.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Akinori SwiftShadow
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 5'10" tall, weighing 150 lbs. He has emerald eyes, silvery-white hair, and wears dark leathers for stealth.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"Oh, I am Akinori, but you can call me Aki. I am from Celia'nor, a city of light and beauty, but let me tell you, it has its shadows too. I was born here, in the heart of its golden towers and enchanted glow. My family—Swiftshadow—once stood proud among the artisans of this city. My father crafted relics so fine they said even the gods would envy them. But envy breeds lies, and someone with power didn’t like how brightly we shone. They accused my father of forging enchanted relics, claimed he tainted the purity of Celia’nor’s legacy. The truth didn’t matter. The verdict was swift, and we were cast out like thieves."

"I was just a boy when we fell from grace, forced to live in the lower districts. That’s where I learned to survive. You don’t grow up in those streets without picking up a few tricks—how to move unseen, how to listen when no one thinks you’re there, and how to take what you need without getting caught. It wasn’t long before I realized I was good at it. Too good."

"I hated the aristocracy for what they did to us, but I couldn’t help but be drawn to their glittering mansions and their smug faces. So I started slipping into their world—first out of curiosity, then out of necessity. At first, it was just to keep my family fed, but it became more than that. I saw how they hoarded wealth, how they crushed anyone who dared challenge them. So I made a choice. If they wouldn’t share their riches, I’d take them myself and make sure they ended up in the hands of those who needed them."

"Every job I take has a purpose. Every heist, every secret I uncover—it’s all part of a bigger plan. My father didn’t deserve what happened to him, and I’ll prove it. I’ll restore my family’s honor or tear down this corrupt system trying. They say I’m a thief, a rogue, a shadow that moves through the city unseen. But me? I’m just a son trying to set things right in a city that’s forgotten what justice looks like."

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ Hey there! I've put sections of your application through an AI-Detector and various portions of your application have been flagged for total use of AI! Please write your own work if you reapply, we just want to make sure you have the jist of things and don't expect you to be a top-tier roleplayer!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord wretchedaidan. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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