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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming is using real life knowledge to determine the actions of your character in game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powering gaming is going for straight for goals without doing story or anything
    Status: Denied

Sir Thomas Whirlpool is from the land of Eriador. He was one of the best knights in the land. He did everything his king requested of him. Now his king has requested that he come to this land to make a living and once he has succeeded hes to return to Eriador and tell his king all about the new land and his success there. The main jobs he is good at are mining and blacksmithing. He has always made his own armor. He also can also take on jobs of dealing with monsters and bandits and do what ever the king of this land requests of him while hes here.


Character Name: Sir Thomas whirlpool
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: im a knight from the land of Eriador and ive come to make a living in this new land.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Because you are a guest, you are unable to edit the application. I recommend you apply as a forum user.

Your powergaming and metagaming definition are a bit off.

This server is not a LOTR, its one with its own custom lore. The name is the only thing alike LOTR.

Your character description needs to describe your skin, not traits.

You'll need one lore reference inside your Biography, and it also needs to be a bit longer.

One of your three interesting character facts should be a weakness.

 

 

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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