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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: xXJessSeikoXx#4136
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when player uses there cheat to get around quicker then anyone else
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: the player is to lazy to follow the story line and want to get the end of quickly instead.
    Status: Denied

I’m looking to seek adventure in this new kingdom, “hello there” I’m here for looking for adventure.


Character Name: Lucy Drakin
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: I have brown hair and green eyes like the forest, brown winter boots to keep me warm, blue hood to keep me dry for the rain.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your powergaming and metagaming definitions really aren’t quite what I’d be looking for, and don’t define the phrases at all;; please do correct these! Here are links to the correct definitions, just be sure to write them in your own words and not plagiarise! ❤️ ❤️

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

- Your bio isn’t formatted particularly well, if you could perhaps split it into more comprehensible sentences making sure it at least 10 sentences long, that would be great! Your bio also doesn’t contain any lore references, I’m afraid;; please make sure to include at least one! Here is a link to the wiki, along with some other links that I think you may find useful! ❤️

WIKI

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Forest_Dwarf

- Your character cannot talk to animals, please change this. You cannot start off with any sort of magical skill or the like, all magic has to be learnt from teachers in game. Also, Silver Wolf isn’t a particularly elven name, I feel – might wish to change this >,<;;

- Your character doesn’t look particularly dwarven; the skin and description you use are rather modern,, please do fix this!! Here is a link to the LotC Skin Archive, where you can find skins that are free to use, reference from, or edit to fit your character. I think you may find this useful ❤️

- Your physical description and your personality traits and quirks are rather short, and you haven’t included a negative personality trait! You may wish to expand upon these, writing between 1-3 sentences for each ? For physical description, you may wish to include things like height, hair colour, eye colour, skin tone, etc. For personality traits and quirks, you may just wish to add a couple more traits, making sure to include at least 1 negative personality trait. ❤️

- Your roleplay scenario isn’t quite there, if you could perhaps format it more like the example, with quotation marks (”) around speech and perhaps some actions after, that would be much appreciated! ❤️

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your powergaming and metagaming definitions still aren’t really there I’m afraid;; please do correct these! Here are links to the correct definitions, just be sure to write them in your own words and not plagiarise! ❤️ ❤️

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

- Your bio isn’t formatted particularly well, if you could perhaps split it into more comprehensible sentences making sure it at least 10 sentences long, that would be great! Your bio also doesn’t contain any lore references, I’m afraid;; please make sure to include at least one! Here is a link to the wiki, along with some other links that I think you may find useful! ❤️

WIKI

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Forest_Dwarf

 

- Your character doesn’t look particularly forest dwarven still; the skin and description you use are alright, but not quiiite fitting,, please do fix this!! Here is a link to the LotC Skin Archive, where you can find skins that are free to use, reference from, or edit to fit your character. I think you may find this useful ! Also a link to the Forest Dwarf wiki, which contains a description of forest dwarven appearance.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Forest_Dwarf ❤️

 

- Your roleplay scenario still isn’t quite there, if you could perhaps include some actions after, rather than just saying your character is there for adventure, and perhaps having some more detailed speech rather than just hello, that would be much appreciated! ❤️

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

❤️

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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