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Ashe0418
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: archive0418
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I just stay in character and only do what my character would.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Like i said before you stay in character and know what your supposed to know so you dont ruin stuff for others.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ashe
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: I wear a basic adventuring outfit with some metal in places i where a mask over my eyes i have brown hair weigh 160.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

Thank you Mi lady my story isnt long to be honest i dont really remember my childhood just flashes every now and then something bad happened i know that i also have had visions of my father he taught me stuff every now and then i remember something i was taught and i use it im trying to find them now if theyre still around that is. Say uh who were those people in the tent?

Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • I am afraid your grammar and spelling through-out this application were not up to the standard acceptable for LotC, try to go over it and fix your grammar and spelling.

 

  • Your definitions are quite simple- in your next application try to specify how you'd avoid certain things such as how to avoid your character being 'perfect' at everything.

 

  • Your backstory is quite short, and there is no reference to what is said inside or outside of dialogue, use "-" to represent when your character is speaking, and layer it with actions outside of that: "Hello there" he would say, wandering in and finding a seat.

 

  • Your skin conceals most of of your face, and I cannot see your eyes or most other features, you could ask for a hand achieving more details for that.

 

 



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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