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Yahli

By Yahli

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Yahlito#4445
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To avoid powergaming in roleplay, every role-player needs to take accountability and play within the game's rules. Be mature and understand that they can ruin the experience of all the other players.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by allowing players to use out-of-character knowledge or information to gain an unfair advantage in the game. Thus, undermining the essence of role-playing characters by negating their potential abilities.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

As I look around the tent curiously, my heart starts to beat with the excitement of a new adventure. I sit down, looking deeply into her eyes, confidently I say "My name is Astra, those who know me definitely do. I've come to this town looking for the thing" Unknowing what I look for, I try my luck with a big shot, to see how the old lady reacts. One thing that I'm certain about, my confidence will not let me down.

Character Name: Astra
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: About 5'6 feet tall, white hair with dark eyes. Shiny silver armour.
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Amayonnaise

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Unfortunately, young humans cannot possess white hair (unless through a defect such as albinism). Please adjust the hair colour to light blonde, or consider changing your character's race to a High Elf! More information can be found on our Core Race Lore Master Thread:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199091-core-race-lore-masterthread/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

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Amayonnaise

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Unfortunately, young humans cannot possess white hair (unless through a defect such as albinism). Please adjust the hair colour to light blonde, or consider changing your character's race to a High Elf! More information can be found on our Core Race Lore Master Thread:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199091-core-race-lore-masterthread/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

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