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YELLOWBURRITO515

By YELLOWBURRITO515

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When people say like ''ime being attcked i need back up''
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: For example ''YELLOWBURRITO515's heads been cut off by MrCheese''
    Status: Denied

I'm very good at stuff and I love lord of the craft

Character Name: YELLOWBURRITO515
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 15
Physical Description: I'm a YELLOWBURRITO I love burritos ok bye
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Dromui

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Hello! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! After reviewing your application, it has been placed onto pending. Do no fear, you've not been denied. You will have 24 hours to make the necessary changes to the application before it is denied. Below, you will find the edits that must be made:

  • Your definitions aren't necessarily wrong, but please expand on them.
  • The overall grammar and spelling of the application could use a bit of work.
  • The backstory should be a minimum of a paragraph, detailing your character's history specifically.
  • The backstory should include at least 1-3 lore references, from our server's history and currently accepted lore.
  • The name should not be your Minecraft account name, but instead what your character will be referred to as.
  • You cannot apply to the server with a character below the age of 18. Up the age, if you would.
  • Your character description should detail how they will be seen. A description of their physical appearance, things like height, weight, eye color, hair color, clothing, etc.
  • Your Interesting Facts section should include facts about your character, not yourself. And should include one fault, to add a bit of depth.

If you require any help making the necessary changes to your application, please feel free to contact me directly on the forums. Below will be some useful links that can help you get accepted to the server. I would definitely suggest joining the LotC New Player Discord; it's a dedicated community of experienced players hoping to help you get accepted to the server.

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

LotC Public Discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

 

LotC Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

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Dromui

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As the necessary edits were not made to the application in the allotted time limit, your application sadly has been denied. However! This is not permanent. In three hours you can reapply to the server! I would suggest making the necessary additions and edits listed above, that way you can be accepted with no issue! I would also suggest using the aforementioned sources I linked, as they will be a great help in applying and being accepted! If you require any other help, do not be afraid to message myself or another member of the application team. Good luck in your future endeavors, friend! 

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