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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: To avoid powergaming in RP, just play fair only describe what your character tries to do, don’t control other people’s characters, accept losing or failing sometimes, keep things realistic for the setting, and remember RP is about having fun and telling a story together, not being op or winning.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay because it gives a player unfair knowledge their character shouldn’t have, which breaks immersion, ruins realism, and takes away equal chances for other players to react naturally in the story.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Siurdon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: Siurdon was 6 feet tall, weighed 190 lbs, and had a thick mustache and a bald head.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”


---"ok i can tell you my story but listen carefully"
 

Siurdon was born in a typical human village. From a young age, his father—an accomplished swordsman—trained him in combat, which made Siurdon highly skilled in fighting. During his youth, he often went hunting and trained relentlessly. One evening, after a long day of practice, his father lowered his sword and sighed.
“Again” — his father said, wiping sweat from his brow. — “You could have finished me much earlier.”
Siurdon laughed softly and rested his blade against the ground.
“Maybe” — he replied — “but then you wouldn’t have had a chance to teach me something new.”
His father raised an eyebrow.
“You’re too humble for your own good.”
“Someone has to be” — Siurdon answered with a grin.

Siurdon did not enjoy reading books, but he understood that knowledge could help him in the future, so whenever he had the chance, he took the opportunity to read. Once, the village elder caught him staring at a thick, dusty tome with clear reluctance.
“You look like that book personally offended you” — the elder joked.
Siurdon chuckled.
“It probably did. But if it knows something I don’t, I suppose we should make peace.”
“That’s a strange way to look at learning.”
“Strange, maybe” — Siurdon said, closing the book carefully — “but useful.”

When Siurdon reached the age of twenty-seven and had saved some money from years of hard work, he decided to leave his home village. On the morning of his departure, a neighbor stopped him at the village gate.
“You’re really leaving? Aren’t you afraid of what’s out there?”
Siurdon tightened the straps of his pack and smiled warmly.
“Of course I am” — he said. — “But fear just means the road is worth walking.”
The neighbor laughed.
“You’re an odd one, Siurdon.”
“Probably” — he replied. — “But I’ve survived being odd so far.”

While visiting the city of Buckville, Siurdon encountered a stout dwarf with a bright red beard struggling to carry an overloaded pack.
“Need a hand?” — Siurdon asked casually, lifting part of the weight before the dwarf could answer.
The dwarf snorted.
“I didn’t ask for help, human.”
“I know” — Siurdon said cheerfully. — “That’s why it’s free.”
The dwarf stared at him for a moment, then burst out laughing.
“You’re either very brave or very foolish.”
“Good news” — Siurdon replied. — “I’ve been told I’m a bit of both.”

From that moment on, they quickly grew fond of one another and decided to continue their journey together. And thus, Siurdon arrived here.

 

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

-The city of Vansk no longer exists. I would advise picking another place.

- Please make the backstory more so you're telling the hag with emotive actions in between the speaking. 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- You cannot be highly skilled, please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

 -The city of bucksville does not exists. I would advise picking another place. try checking out our resources! https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/forum/910-starting-locations/

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nation_Realms

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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