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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when saying stuff that you are doing and knowing things out of role or that your character wont know.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When your character does something they cant do or when they do something that the other player does not have a chance to block or argue against .
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Alright lets get on with the hard part..

 

Ok so Liam is a human who was adopted at a very young age after his father found him alone in the woods. He has a older brother and sister his brother being 3 years older and his sister being 6 years older . His father started teaching him the art of archery from a young age and he is now one of the best where his brother is a very skilled swordsman.Right before his father died he left him a golden pendant that he made him swore to never loose and he has kept his promise.His fathers death affected him a lot and he developed a fear for fire when in large quantities.He was always a clever and charismatic kid and was always willing to learn new things and always had his nose in a book.At the age of 15 he ran away from home and nobody knows why everyone just accepted that he was dead and after a while so did his family.He made himself a well a hideout in a secret cave that was hidden well near Vrakai and every once and then getting food from the traders of the towns.He studied a lot of languages and can speak elven very well and is a master strategist knowing a lot of the lands structure.And that is where my story starts 28 years after his disappearance... 


Character Name: Liam
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 43
Physical Description: Liam is a blonde haired human with blueish silver eyes with his left eye being blind with a scar over it he he is about 6.2 feet tall.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on:

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 There seems to be small confusion with dates and places on your biography. It's not possible that your character ran out at age of 15 and lived near Vrakai. Vrakai is in Atlas, and Atlas came out only 19 years ago. Please either change the location to some in Axios, or edit the application in other way. Remember to keep the required at least one server lore reference!

 

 
Else your application is great, thank you for applying and putting time to it! ?

 

You have 24 hours to make the asked changes!

 

Server lore you can easily read from the Wiki !

I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

 

You may also contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game (MyLittleUnicorn) , if you are in need of assistance or if you have any questions.

You can also always ask for help on the new player discord you seem to be already on!

 
Good luck!

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Your application has been:

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You were unable to do the asked changes in the given time

 

You may re-apply in 3 hours!

If you choose to re-apply, please make the asked changes to it!

If you have any questions, feel free to contact me here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

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