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HogoBojo

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    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two different ones! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → What your character's biggest fear should be at least two sentences. 

    → What your character dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences.

    → The Shire is a place from LoTR. On LoTC we have a different place for Halfling, called Bramblebury.

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord HogoBojo#0001 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    →  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason:

     

    → Well over twenty-four hours have passed without any changes being made.


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason:

     

    → You didn't accept the server rules.


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

     

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

    H9EtV7A9qe5h6u7P7RA9MzFllJWZkfYjcRTIBzUwRPmVnM8fxLa2p6e63KqujlWh53AUj3yfmbzaFzjwB_wB1LmKCPPYLLgrdQQxFY4BNDId3PrCHuWt__bttjfszoQ0PflFxxcd

    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

     

    → Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Blood Elves don’t exist, please remove this from your bio.

    → Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

    → Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → What your character’s biggest fear is should be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please ensure that your dialect are surrounded by quotes.

    → Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

    → Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

     

    → Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Please include an example for your metagaming and powergaming definitions.

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → You can’t apply as a character over the age of 100.

    → Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

    → Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    → What your character’s biggest fear is should be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should both be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

    → Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

    → Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

  6. H9EtV7A9qe5h6u7P7RA9MzFllJWZkfYjcRTIBzUwRPmVnM8fxLa2p6e63KqujlWh53AUj3yfmbzaFzjwB_wB1LmKCPPYLLgrdQQxFY4BNDId3PrCHuWt__bttjfszoQ0PflFxxcd

    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

     

    → Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Please include an example for your metagaming and powergaming definitions.

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → You can’t apply as a General in the army. Please join an army and work your way up if you wish to claim such, or start your own in Roleplay when you join the server.

    → Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

    → Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    → You must include a fear for your character.

    → What your character’s biggest fear is should be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should both be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario emotes should be written in third person.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

    → Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

  7. H9EtV7A9qe5h6u7P7RA9MzFllJWZkfYjcRTIBzUwRPmVnM8fxLa2p6e63KqujlWh53AUj3yfmbzaFzjwB_wB1LmKCPPYLLgrdQQxFY4BNDId3PrCHuWt__bttjfszoQ0PflFxxcd

    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

     

    → Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Please include an example for your metagaming and powergaming definitions.

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → Humans can’t have red eyes. Please change this.

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    → What your character’s biggest fear is should be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should both be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario emotes should be written in third person.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

    → Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

     

    → Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Please include an example for your metagaming and powergaming definitions.

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves 

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

    → Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

    → Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    → Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    → What your character dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences and explain why.

    → Please remove that your character feels a connection to trees from your application.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please ensure that your character's dialogue is surrounded by quotes.

    → Please don’t include a common character trope such as: your parents were killed by bandits.

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

     

    → Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Please include an example for your metagaming and powergaming definitions.

    → Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    → Please redo your Personality Traits/Quirks.

    → This is a Roleplay Server, please do not refer to it as a server in your application as your answers must be what your character is afraid of, not you.

    → You can’t get diamonds or netherite on this server so please change that part of your character's dislike section.

    → What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences and explain why they like or dislike that.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please ensure that your character's dialogue is surrounded by quotes.

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reasons:

     

    → Well over twenty-four hours have passed since you were contacted in messages to make further changes.

    → Your application contains information that is against our server rules.


    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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