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Changed Status to Denied
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason:
→ Twenty four hours have passed without you making any changes.
After correcting the things listed in the previous pending message, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#3058, and I recommend you join the
LOTC Discord using the following invite:
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason:
→ Twenty four hours have passed without you making any changes.
After correcting the things listed in the previous pending message, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#3058, and I recommend you join the
LOTC Discord using the following invite:
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Changed Status to Denied
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
→ Twenty four hours have passed without you making any changes.
After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#3058, and I recommend you join the
LOTC Discord using the following invite:
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
→ The Kingdom of Hanseti-Ruska does not draft troops so please change that part of your character bio.
→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. There’s too much static in that skin. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord HogoBojo#3058 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
→ Please do not mention any form of magic in your application.
→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. I’ve attached some links below that I think should help. Also please keep in mind that your biography must be at least ten sentences.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
→ Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there.
→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include two positives and one negative.
→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is done incorrectly. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. It also should be grammatically correct and include quotes.
→ Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord HogoBojo#3058 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
→ Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
→ Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
→ I’ve noticed that there are some errors with your backstory. Please make sure to read the LORE & include two LORE references. Due to the fact that your character is 75 years old, it is not possible for you to have been born in the city that you stated. This is because that city has not existed for over 400 years. You can’t be a master of archery and swordsmanship because that is powergaming. I could not find any references to “Forest Raiders” or an “Enchanted Forest” so please change these parts of your application. You also can’t claim you’ve interacted with Royalty. I suggest checking out the Wood Elves Wiki page which I linked below to help you with your LORE references.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves
→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord HogoBojo#3058 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Under Review