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HogoBojo

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to these reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

     

    → Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

    → Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

    → In your character biography it says you’re an Olog, however you must make a special character application if you wish to become an Olog. So please change that to reflect the character race you chose.

    → You can’t say that you’re the leader of a nation, or large group. If you wish to become such please do so when you join the server. 

    → Your character can’t be super intelligent/have excessive knowledge in a subject that most people wouldn’t. If you wish for your character to become intelligent, then please do so in roleplay when you join the server.

    → You can’t use powergaming in your application. Please change what your character likes most about themselves, as it contains a form of powergaming. 

    → May not contain a common character trope such as: parents killed by bandits or raiders. 

    → Please don't call your character powerful in your application.

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the reason

     

    •  You didn’t accept the server rules.

     

    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @HogoBojo#0001, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     

     → Your metagaming definition is correct, however you need an example.

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Grand_Kingdom_of_Urguan 

    → Your character's weight does not reflect the weight range of Mountain Dwarves.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves

    → Your character’s eye colour can not be green as Mountain Dwarves don’t have that eye colour.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves 

    → The part regarding your biggest fear of losing your brother due to your family being murdered by thieves doesn’t line up with your character’s bio about your parents dying in a fire. 

    → For what your character likes about themselves, it must contain two things they like about themselves and be at least two sentences. 

    → For what your character dislikes about themselves, it must contain two things they dislike about themselves and be at least two sentences. 

    → For your roleplay scenario, please use quotes and have at least one emote.

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mountain_Dwarves 

    → Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

    https://app.grammarly.com/ 

     

    After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @HogoBojo#0001, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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    Your application has been denied at this time due to the reason

     

    → Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time. Rape is strictly prohibited on LOTC.

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001, and I recommend you join the 

    LotC Discord using the following invite: 

    https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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    Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg HogoBojo, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord HogoBojo#0001. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do...

    /creq [message]

    … along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!

    After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    I highly recommend you join the LotC Discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!

    https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Newd_Player_Guide 

     

    In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race. 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

     

    If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

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    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → Your character can’t lose all their memories as this is a bad character trope that isn’t allowed. For more info on character tropes check out the post I linked below. 

    https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/?tab=comments#comment-1785316 

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please use quotes when your character is talking as well.

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord HogoBojo#0001 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the

    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    → https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

     

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    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

    → Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → You can’t claim to be well known.

    → What great battle did your Father die in?

    → You can’t write that the King of Haense did something in your roleplay scenario that he didn’t. This would be a form of powergaming.

    → You can’t claim to be a Master or really good at doing something. If you wish to become skilled in doing something then please do so in roleplay when you join the server.

    → Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

    → Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    https://app.grammarly.com/ 

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord HogoBojo#3058 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    →  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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    Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

     

    → Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → Your character can’t lose all their memories as this is a bad character trope that isn’t allowed. For more info on character tropes check out the post I linked below.

    https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/?tab=comments#comment-1785316 

    → For your characters physical description, please describe what your character currently looks like. Please don’t describe what they sometimes look like.

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

    → Your character can’t have grey hair at such a young age.

     

    If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord HogoBojo#3058 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
    LotC  Discord as well.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

    →  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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    Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

     

    → Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

    → Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    → Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

    → Your Roleplay Scenario Response must have quotes around when your character is talking.


     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#3058, and I recommend you join the 

    LotC Discord using the following invite: 

    https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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