Ztrog

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My boy kept on the straight narrow after all 

The mad man did it, but dude he is so right where the heck are small towns everything is locked up in big cities. +1

MC Name: Ztrog

Character's Name: Garret Palmer

Character's Age: 60 (Upon Death)

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Heartlander

Transformed form:

         Phantom

Creator's MC Name:

         N/A

Creator's RP Name:

         N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Phantoms are souls of the dead who have passed in tragic ways resulting in them not being able to pass on into the afterlife.  This may be they were murdered in cold blood, their will alone lets them refuse from passing on, or other means of great tragedy had fallen upon these unfortunate souls. Phantoms are completely made up of a paranormal matter known as ectoplasm, which tends to somewhat malleable to an extent and can even go invisible to the normal eyes of descendants and other mortals. Magics of the void such as Fire Evocation for example are able to harm the Phantom, and weapons comprised of aurum can harm the Phantoms as well. But other matter such as mundane metals, and well just most of the mundane will pass through the Phantom. There are four different types of Phantoms that are in this creature category: Revenant, Specter, Poltergeist, and Gravens. 

Revenants: These are what all lost souls are upon their soul not being able to reach the afterlife, they are typically very confused and emotional upon their reawakening. They are a grey hue in appearance typically and often have signs of how they had died in life. From ripped and torn clothing to bloodstains on their ghostly form,  they will have no memory as to how they have died. (This will last 1 ooc week) Once they have realized how they have died and what they are they will turn into one of the three following types of Phantoms.

Specters: These ghostly apparitions often seen in shades of blue and are seen as the most benevolent of the phantoms. Upon the knowledge of their death, they had learned as a revenant they have chosen to accept how they have died and what had become of them, being at ease with their ethereal form. 

Poltergeist: These ghostly apparitions are seen in shades of red and black, they are much much more malevolent than their Specter counterparts. They filled with pure rage and hatred for most things due to the knowledge of their death. They will not accept what they have become and will attack nearly anything, being ghosts of pure malice and hate.. 

Graven: Unlike their other phantom brethren are not comprised of the same ectoplasm, they are husks of their former selves driven by a single and sometimes even simple goal. They will do anything it takes to accomplish this goal no matter how small it may seem to an outsider. They will do this for the rest of their existence as a Graven. This is also be the sub-type that I will be focusing on for when my character passes the Revenant Phase. His own goal that continues to drive on wards after death would be to have a drive to continue to keep a family line safe like he did in life. Making it be his soul reason to keep his prolonged existence. 

All Ghosts suffer mental illnesses such as being bipolar to PSTD due to their state of being,

Poltergeists and Specter may have major events that occur that will make them switch from one form of Phantom to another.

Ghosts are unable to pass by SOLID lines of aurum 

They may pass through aurum dust but will feel agony from such. 

They cannot phase through walls or gates if they cannot access them mechanically. 

They cannot learn nor use magic of any kind

They cannot become other creatures

Gravens are required keep following their goal no matter how simple it is, failure to do so can result in a revoked ca.

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

Depending on the sub type the phanatom’s well sub race. 

Revenant: A transparent apparition, often showing ways they have died in life and having grey like overtone. Lacking in any other color but grey, black and white. 

Specter: A transparent apparition but this benevolent ghost appears in hues of blue, reflecting their acceptance in their death still keeping in appearance to how they appeared in life.

Poltergeist: A ghastly apparition that looks horrifying, coming black and red in color reflecting their pure rage and inability to accept how they died and what they have become.  

Graven: They do not appear like their formerly stated phantoms, they are physical manifestations of their former selves. They do appear mostly normal but thier skin looks grey and almost glass like upon closer inspection. 

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No

Lucis Avila looks to the poster and blinks. “I- she, okay that’s it” He rolls up the sleeves of his robe. “My cousins is in official need of help”

Syndra looked back to Kariv and nodded. “Yeeeah I think you might want to do that.”

Roman Torchfield ripped down one of the posters as he read it in his hand, before shrugging and threw it into his satchel, walking off.

Been seeing the progress of this and again it’s super amazing I really hope this is accepted! Huge +1 from me.

I think this is pretty cool lore and I dont see any too over powered or the such just nifty stuff +1

“I want assure all who attend our school that we shall get to the bottom of this murder, I put all my efforts to it I assure you” Lucis Avila would state as he dusted off his robes.

Neo you be one of my goodest of good friendos I hope after everything you will be okie and away from more of that kinds of stuff on lotc. You are a good person and you nor should anyone have people stab them in the back like that. 

Azalea Farlander read over the documents scoffing with a look of disgust on her face. “How horrid, it this what the state of the Empire has come to? My father must be rolling in his grave with this man trying to use such laws to silence others” She would say with a shake of her head. 

49 minutes ago, 1_Language_1 said:

Dammit why are all of Matt's friends becoming ghosts and yet I chose to play his DAD as a ghost

Shouldve brought back Matt bro ;-;

MC Name: Ztrog

Character's Name: Clovis Farlander

Character's Age: 42

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Heartlander

Transformed form:

         Phantom

Creator's MC Name:

         N/A

Creator's RP Name:

         N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Phantoms are souls of the dead who have passed in more violent ways or more commonly just tragic ways resulting in them not being able to pass on into the afterlife.  This may be they were murdered in cold blood, their will alone lets them refuse from passing on, or other means of great tragedy had fallen upon these unfortunate souls. Phantoms are completely comprised of a metaphysical matter known as ectoplasm, which tends to somewhat malleable to an extent and can even go invisible to the normal eyes of descendants and other mortals. Magics of the void such as Fire Evocation for example are able to harm the Phantom, and weapons comprised of aurum can harm the Phantoms as well. But other matter such as mundane metals, and well just most of the mundane will pass through the Phantom. There are four different types of Phantoms that are in this creature category: Revenant, Specter, Poltergeist, and Gravens. 

Revenants: These are what all lost souls are upon their soul not being able to reach the afterlife, they are typically very confused and emotional upon their reawakening. They are a grey hue in appearance typically and often have signs of how they had died in life. From ripped and torn clothing to bloodstains on their ghostly form,  they will have no memory as to how they have died. (This will last 1 ooc week) Once they have realized how they have died and what they are they will turn into one of the three following types of Phantoms.

Specters: These ghostly apparitions often seen in shades of blue and are seen as the most benevolent of the phantoms. Upon the knowledge of their death, they had learned as a revenant they have chosen to accept how they have died and what had become of them, being at ease with their ethereal form. 

Poltergeist: These ghostly apparitions are seen in shades of red and black, they are much much more malevolent than their Specter counterparts. They filled with pure rage and hatred for most things due to the knowledge of their death. They will not accept what they have become and will attack nearly anything, lashing out in pure anger. 

Graven: Unlike their other phantom brethren are not comprised of the same ectoplasm, they are husks of their former selves driven by a single and sometimes even simple goal. They will do anything it takes to accomplish this goal no matter how small it may seem to an outsider. They will do this for the rest of their existence as a Graven. 

RED LINES

All Ghosts suffer mental illnesses such as being bipolar to PSTD due to their state of being,

Poltergeists and Specter may have major events that occur that will make them switch from one form of Phantom to another.

Ghosts are unable to pass by SOLID lines of aurum 

They may pass through aurum dust but will feel agony from such. 

They cannot phase through walls or gates if they cannot access them mechanically. 

They cannot learn nor use magic of any kind

They cannot become other creatures

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No

Eletha would smile brightly as she read the letter. “Oh! Good for them, I will have to prepare something fort heir special day!” The mali’fenn would exclaim.

While I do not know much about the original lore I do find this write up to give fairly interesting topics for roleplay and well as a fairly neat race in of it’s self. While I dont see a need for a whole CA wipe I do still potential in this as a whole. I do not feel right criticizing something I had not had  a grasp of before hand, but I can certainly say this is a nice attempt at a ‘new’ Creature player race as a whole. 

I’ll be teaching this loser 

MC Name: Ztrog

Character's Name: Lucis Avila

Character's Age: Young

Character's Race:

Half Elf

Link to your accepted MA:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/190248-fire-evocationmathaztrogman/?tab=comments#comment-1764531

What magic(s) will you be teaching?

Fire Evocation

Summarise the Lore of this magic(s):

Fire evocation is the process of a voidal magic connecting oneself to the void and conjuring or casting fire from the void itself in a particular way or direction. It can work from creating a ball of flames all the way to making shapes with the fire into different colors out of combat such as a butterfly made of flames. This magic mostly consists of things for combative purposes that can also harm it’s wielder, but does have a few no combative uses. There are three types of flames when a master is casting these spells, Blue fire (flames are , orange fire (standard flames) and white fire which would actually kill the mage in the process of conjuring such as it would drain too much mana and the heat alone would end the casters life.  

Red Lines:

• Spells require the user to have eye sight of a target
• The fire can hurt the user, they are not immune to flames
•  This magic cannot affect the real elements 
• Normal fire balls do not do blunt damage unless you are using the combustive spell [Tier 5]
• The fire you conjure will act like that of normal fire if not using the blue fire spell. 

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

No

Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

Yes

Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

No

Lily Farlander would felt her breath catch in her throat for a period of time before breathing once more, upon hearing the news of Xavis’ demise. “O-oh GOD he’s gone, really gone” She had swayed in place and stumbled about where she stood in an attempt to remain standing, seeming light headed. She clutched a note that she thought she had written so long ago, tears had begun to stream down her cheeks. “I’m sorry Xavis...So..so..sorry” She managed to choke out as she held the note close to her chest, breaking out into sobs.

A nicely written piece and a interesting addition to the collection of Deamons we have now, hope it gets accepted 😄 +1

Maria would read the missive and frowned. "A shame I quite liked the Sohaer, I hope he keeps well." 

I love it! Your race lore writing is so thought out and well written 😄 Big +1 

Maria would read the written missive and released a sigh. “Here we go I suppose” The literal flower woman would say with boredom laced on her features. 

Another cool addition of crystals to add to the world, I find the idea of Focil Taint to be interesting as well! Squak making yet another awesome written piece as to be expected. 😄 

MC Name: Ztrog

Character's Name: Syndra

Character's Age: 73

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         Wood Elf

Transformed form:

         Epiphyte

Creator's MC Name:

         N/A

Creator's RP Name:

         N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

An Epiphyte is a descendant who has been seemingly lured into a forest or an cave like area where a fae plant had exited into the mortal realm from the Fae realm. Once the victim has fallen asleep the roots the fae plant will put the descendant into a cocoon while holding it’s soul. Upon exiting the cocoon the descendant would find themselves to have had tier body fully to be made out of entirely plant matter. They would also find that they will be unable to use voidal magic and require more sunlight or daylight depending on the fae plant. In addition ever 50-100 years the epiphyte will go through a rebirth cycle, this does not mean they will extend the life span from thier former race.

Red Lines

Voidal magic will harm them, and will die if they attempt to use it.

Druid magic does not affect the Epiphyte,

The cannot control plant life or communicate with nature like a druid. 

They cannot reproduce a biological child as they cannot get pregnant.

Only descendant shave the ability to become an epiphyte.

They are only allowed to have one fae plant at one time.

They will keep the curses of their former race.

They cant forced others to sleep next to their fae plant.

They cannot be a plant that will require an st.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Do you understand that if this creature's lore is undergoing an activity trial and that trial fails, you will no longer be able to play this creature and will be forced to either revert the character back to its normal form (if it was a transformative type) or stop playing the character entirely (if it is an entirely new creature)?:

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         I have two Epiphytes apps already accepted