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  1. Dame Alexandra Barclay sit in her home, after just been told the new of her great uncles demise. A frown on her face, holding her cane within her hand. A lightstone glimmer at the handle that same item he had blessed all that time ago. "Gutt bye uncle...enjoy vy new adventures."

     

    Vivienne Asul'onn thinks over the new with tears rolling down her cheeks. An picture frame held within her hands. A portrait of her, Elias and their brother Christopher. "Im sorry you had to go big brother, never got to tell you who was taller again did i?" A pained laugh leaves her. "I might be selfish, but...Im happy I didn't watch you die like Chrissy."

     

    Deep in a downward spiral of despair, Juliette de Silva was crumpled upon the ground, heaving out great sobs. Tears stormed down her pale cheeks like that of waterfalls, her form shook like a leaf within a violent gale, barely holding on. "Elias, why...why did tu have to go..it is moi fault all moi fault.."

  2. MC Name:

             Ztrog

     

    Character's Name:

             Sariel

     

    Character's Age:

             108

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Alchemy

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             SilverTheDM

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Aurelion

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

     

  3. MC Name:

             Ztrog

     

    Character's Name:

             Lucis Avila

     

    Character's Age:

             182

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Atronach Forging

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             Mr_Etan

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Sarrion

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

     

  4. MC Name:

             GhostyMirage

     

    Character's Name:

             Sunder

     

    Character's Age:

             45

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Sorvian Sculpting

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             PaleBeast

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             Marcel

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

     

  5. MC Name:

             Ztrog

     

    Character's Name:

             Sariel

     

    Character's Age:

             105

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Seer

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             N/a

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

     

  6. [This is private information, please do not metagame.]

     

     

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    Dark, darker, yet darker. Darkness had become the only thing Sariel had known for years now. Days wore by after her initial blinding, and the darkness slowly evermore became suffocating. She hated it, it had made her dread every waking moment, it was disgust, it was filth. The loss of her vision was a disgrace. She had to get her sight back somehow, it wasn't just a want but a need She had begun to become frantic, insanity beginning to grip at her psyche. Despite her searching, and searching, and searching no crafters would take her pleas, leaving her in her blindness. In her hysteria, the woman had collapsed, falling frail upon the ground as she fell unconscious. 

     

    Her subconscious brought Sariel to a black nebulous plan, the sound of metal rending and the blackened earth beneath her feet to be constantly shifting never giving her a moment's rest. “You taunt me, why must I dream, dream if for the fools. I will not be toyed with by my own mind!” The woman wails within the darkened mindscape she currently found herself in within her dream. A feral roar bellowed out thundering, bestial. Sariel stared definitely within the nebulous abyss that was all around her. “Just take me, let it end, the dark the dark it consumes me, day and night, day and night.” She spoke in an unstable cant. Much to her dismay and awe, she did begin to see something upon the tar-like ground, and dark eye, devoid of any color. 

     

    The ground continuously rumbles and sifts beneath the elf, causing her to fall upon her knee, staring at that tenebrous eye. A rip of the ground tearing in numerous places made a chill roll up her spine. Monstrous maw with rows of jagged yellowed teeth could be seen. In sync, the maws decorating the landscape would let out a chorus of chaotic, ravenous voices all speaking incoherently to the afflicted ‘ame. A snap of the mind truly came as she let out a laugh, her voice now becoming once with the eldritch maws that now surrounded her.

     

    The ravenous voice burrowed deeper, ever deeper within her ears. Through the chaos, she began to decipher some words. “Let me help you, child, allow me to lighten your burden.” She didn't understand, who was talking to her, what was talking to her. It didn't matter, in her broken psyche she only knew one thing, there could be a reprieve, a light to break apart this darkness. Raking her digits down her visage Sariel lets out one last maddening laugh, making feverous nods. 

     

    “Ti! Take me! Lessen my woes! Free me!” She bellows out, thus letting a thunderous roar of the chorus of maws cackle with glee, the elfess throwing herself forward in her bout of insanity. The darkness once more took over all of her vision, the sight of her vision fading away as she was thrown out, waking to her living nightmare, but now with a sense of knowing, knowing what? Well, she only had to guess based on what she had foreseen. 

     

     

  7. MC Name:

             Ztrog

     

    Character's Name:

             Eletha Avery

     

    Character's Age:

             233

     

    Character's Race:

             High Elf

     

    Link to your accepted MA:

           

     

     

    What magic(s) will you be teaching?

             Water Evocation

     

    Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:

             

    A subset of Voidal Magic called "Water Evocation" allows the caster or mage to call forth water or ice from the emptiness beyond the Veil. After that, cutting off the connection would also cut off the magic's appearance or use, with the energy returning to the vacuum. The summoned water can still be utilized to soak objects or absorb substances, but these effects will vanish when the mage's connection to the void does. As a result, it is summoned similarly to other voidal magic, with the mage connecting to the void and calling forth magic as long as their connection is maintained. Despite being purely ornamental, the caster also has control over the magic's size, form, and color. Like other voidal arts, the void exacts a toll on the body as a kind of payment for the mage's repeated use of the magics. With consistent use over the course of two OOC months or upon reaching T3 of the magic, one's strength is then tapered down so that one can only wear leather or half-plate and cannot wield anything bigger than a shortsword.

     

     

    Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?

             

    Water evocation can be divided into two divisions, merely Water spells and Ice spells, although all Voidal magics comprise both combative and non-combative spells.When a mage first begins to study and learn to cast, they often begin with water, which has a number of functions. As opposed to fire magic, ice magic can only be effectively summoned once the magician has achieved T3 and has the ability to strengthen their connection.

     

     

    Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    Eletha would let out a sigh, watching a horse-mounted raider charging towards the tavern from her vantage point. She flexes her fingers, her body giving a shudder as a white mist began to billow around her form. 

     

    The pale elfess’ fingers began to twitch as she took a sharp breath in. An icy mist began to drift up from her palm, a creeping frost crawling up her glove coating her fingertips. A crack sound chimed out as flakes of snow floated up above her palm, coalescing into a formless bulk of ice roughly the size of a baseball. 

     

    The chunk of ice formed above the mage's hand would begin to crack and fragment until it formed itself into a very pointed spike of ice. With that Eletha turned her eyes back onto the rider with a sigh, she’d push out her palm, sending the ice spike on it’s way before moving back to return to her previous activities. 

     

     

     

    Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?

             

     

    Eletha flings open the door of her student, pacing into the room she jabs a gloved finger in his direction. “Boyce, it is time for a lesson, connect to the void.” He would demand with a fiendish grin on her face due to the sudden barging in of this surprise lesson.

     

    Boyce would fumble with the tampered glass bottle in his clutches, it smashes to the ground before whipping around. “Eh?? Oh Eletha! Oh r-right voidal connection got it.” He stammers out before letting out a breath, a luminous blue hue engulfed his eyes.

     

    Eletha fishes into her pocket within her robes before pacing over to a lone coffee table, placing down a bottle of ale. She takes several steps back turning her icy blue hues back onto the scrappy-looking man. “I want you to summon forth water, shape it from the void like you would with any other spell.”

     

    Boyce nodded to his teacher, looking sadly at his broken bottles on the ground before his glowing blue eyes turned back onto the bottle and then to his hand. He flexes his digits, exhaling, the shimmering blue light of his aura flickers across his digits. He pushes up in the air with his palm, whisking about the air before water coalesces from thin air in a bubble-like fashion around his hand. 

     

    Eletha would smile warmly. “Perfect, now stretch out the liquid, imagine as you would pulling forth a rope, and upon that end of the rope picture there are knives, the shard that will rend whatever it will contact. Then lash out from where you are with it!” 

     

    Boyce narrows his eyes looking at the ale bottle Eletha had placed down, he runs his hand over the ball of water, the liquid flowing out into a long length from his hand. He lets out a soft breath, a white frosty mist leaves his maw, ice shard grows out from the end of the water whip. He pulls his arm back before flicking it forward, the shard of ice slicing the bottle into pieces. 

     

    Eletha makes a small clap of approval, a grin spreading over her stark white features. “Wonderful as always m’dear, oh I must go, for now, see you for our next lesson!” With that, the ‘fenn would leave the same way she came in. 

     

    Boyce lets out a breath the glow fading from his eyes, the water vaporizing into thin air. “Thanks again Eletha!” His smile quickly fades looking to the smashed bottle, ale splattered about his study. “Ah crap.” 

     

     

    Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?

             

    I would most likely Dm them and ask them exactly what they did and how they emoted the spell in question, that is if I had not seen such happen firsthand. Regardless if it had happened on purpose or on accident I’d try to help tell them where they had gone wrong with emoting such if they would be willing to listen to what I had to say on the matter. After such events, I would want to talk to a St telling them the situation if they had told me about such thing. If they had not and my student refused to listen to me I would tell a St about such things so they would be handled accordingly. 

     

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

             Nope

  8. MC Name:

             Ztrog

     

    Character's Name:

             Alex

     

    Character's Age:

             27

     

    What feat(s) will you be learning?

             Seer

     

    Teacher's MC Name:

             N/A

     

    Teacher's RP Name:

             N/a

     

    Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

             Yes

     

    Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             No

     

    Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

             Yes

     

  9. [This is not publicly known so please don't metagame]

     

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    Cavaleiros e Templários | Pinterest: @patriciamaroca | Dark souls art,  Knight, Fantasy character design

     

    Alex had been without her eyes for quite some time now, days, weeks, months? It had all started to blur together for her, not as the thought of anything being blurred could do her much good in her state. The imagery of the violent orange flames cascading out from her attacker's ring still plagued her find, the burns keeping her from seeing still very much present across her face that was often hidden beneath a blindfold. Her dreams for some time have begun to haunt her, what was taken from her, her vision while it gave her some peace she felt isolated, sealed off from the world. Her dreams took her around the places she remember vividly before she lost her sight, usually ending with her waking in a cold sweat. 

     

    One night in her state of ever-spiraling dreams something was different. She could see the cold night of Reinmar, the docks of Haense not too far in the distance, sitting at the shoreline as she had dreamt of often since she lost her vision. The sound of crunching dirt echoes about in her head, almost thunderous among the silent landscape. In the dark lands of Reinmar, the woman's vision flicks about until it would land upon a lone figure not but feet away from her. The being was clad in silvered armor head to tone, gleaming within the moonlight. Upon the chest of the knight would be a Lorraine cross. 

     

    Alex rises to a stand, her vision locked on the pale knight, her vision not leaving his visage, unable to look elsewhere. Slowly the pale knight approached Alex, and a flurry of whispering voices filled her ears as he grew closer. “Take it, take it, take it, let God help you” The voices chanted in a choir within her mind, the knight raising a hand, ever so silent as he plucks the Lorraine cross from around his neck. The stoic figure would hold it out towards Alexandra by its Ferrum chain, his form still as he holds the holy sigil. 

     

    Alex hesitate her vision still locked onto the still knight like he was a frozen statue, a monument of pious deeds of the past. Slowly Alex moved forward, boots crunching the dirt underfoot, the sounds echoing into the silent night air. She lifts a hand, hesitating with pursed lips. The pale knight cranes its head, the helmet locked solely on the woman, the cross still outstretched. “Ich…Ich vill accept Godan’s grace.” She utters out, Alex moves her arm forward taking hold of the cross, taking it from the grasp of the pale knight. The sound of gonging church bells floods her ears, looking as the knight vanishes from sight within a cloud of white feathers. The woman would jolt, sitting upright in her bed sweat pouring down her clammy face. She holds a hand to her face, as she shudders, awoken by that vivid dream. 

     

  10. MC Name:

             GhostyMirage

     

    Character's Name:

             Karno Osser

     

    Character's Age:

             

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             N/A

     

    Transformed form:

             N/A

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             PinkPyro

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             Kirja Scribe Edevane

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Atronachs are artificial creations constructed of void that has been given sentience. Transfiguration and the voidal magic of choosing are the two sorts of magic required to create an atronach. The art of atronach forging is the process of giving an elemental construct sentience. Atronachs don't actively rely on a mana reserve, though. Instead, they need to be recharged at a mana obelisk every several days to a week, generally by their creator. 

    The majority of atronachs have a humanoid form, but animal-like forms are also possible. Atronachs with extra limbs will have their strength divided evenly. Various plates may be employed to define an atronach's shape in addition to the core to keep it in shape. These plates don't have to enclose the creation's body completely; they can be employed to protect specific areas of it. Any material may be used to forge the plates, but it should be remembered that the materials utilized must not conflict with any part of the construct. For instance, choosing wood plates for a fire atronach would be foolish because they would just burn up. And additionally, it should be noted that Atronachs can not be any larger than 7ft in height.

    A mage with Atronach Forging must be skilled in transfiguration and the evocation of choice in order to make an Atronach. They may also collaborate with other magi who possess the required spells, provided the atronach forger, who is the leading mage, can keep a firm voidal connection. An atronach is created similarly to a golem; it needs a magical core to support the numerous intricate enchantments that give it sentience and motion. The central component is a sizable mana gem and then given the sentience necessary for an atronach to function by being infused with grand enchantment. In order to determine the atronach's qualities, the core must then be transmutated with transfiguration with an evocation such as fire, earth, water, ect.


     

    Atronach bodies are often humanoid in design, although they can also resemble animals. They are made from plates of different sizes and shapes, and they are not required to cover the entire construct; they might instead only protect certain areas, such as the core. Atronachs are capable of learning, thinking, and applying knowledge to situations even if they are constrained by the will and command of their creator. 

    They are also extremely intelligent and do possess sentience. Even though they are emotionless, they can still communicate with others in a similar way to that of their descendants. They can also mimic emotion even if it is not real and can speak any language. Atronachs are weaker than other constructions like golems since their core can be destroyed with just a few strong hits. 

     

    There are five main different types of atronachs that can be forged; that being water, air, earth, fire, and ice. And any atronachs of these evocation types must abide by the redlines of their respective evocations. However, one of the liquid state atronachs: Fire will be the one I shall be focusing upon. 

    Fire Atronachs are the product of an Atronach endowed with Voidal Fire's abilities. As the most explosive and destructive type of arcane construct, they produce devastating strikes using voidal flame. However, given their talent at casting, they are now a bit more susceptible to damage. As they are a good deal weaker then their solid form counter parts.

    Ice and water are particularly effective against Fire Atronachs, making this the most efficient method of taking them out. If they are allowed to become wet in a specific region, that area will struggle to produce flame until the water dries up or evaporates. The Fire Atronach will become unconscious if the fire is entirely extinguished by water. Additionally, they possess all of the common Atronach vulnerabilities as they are weaker than something such as a golem, and are especially weak to things like warding/abjuration.

     

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

     

    Karno is a large hulking figure, a flaming atronach that is constructed of various series of thin steel plates that would overall make a humanoid shape standing roughly around seven feet in height. 

     

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Yes

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Yes

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N/A

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