Ztrog

Thats my ***** now 2/3

MC Name:

         Ztrog

Character's Name:

         Alexandra von Audrick

Character's Age:

         Old

What feat(s) will you be learning?

         Corcitură

Teacher's MC Name:

         Maeral Daethyra

Teacher's RP Name:

         Eepykat

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

         Yes

Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         N/A

Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

After being told the contents of her letter and of Karl's passing a hand presses to the aging Dame's mouth. Tears then trickle down her cheeks, wetting the blindfold that covers her eyes. "Oncle Karl...Ich vish I vas zhere vith vy." A sniffle then follows. "Ich vill..keep making vy proud Ich promise." 

MC Name:

         Puddlemancy

Character's Name:

         Mirrak

Character's Age:

         Old

Character's Race:

         High Elf

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Rh'thoraen Necromancy

Teacher's MC Name:

         Kanapes

Teacher's RP Name:

         Elliphas

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

While I do think it is written pretty nicely and I like some concepts, the fact that it is weakening fire magic as a whole and locking things Fire Evocationists could do already behind another slot is a bit silly. 

Yessir +1

MC Name: Ztrog

RP Name: Seraphina/Mariska

Persona ID: 62078

Very epic lets gooo 

4 minutes ago, NightcastorKitty said:

@Ztrog

Already been edited just waiting on Cloaked to review again.

MC Name:

         Ztrog

Character's Name:

         Seraphina

Character's Age:

         Old

Character's Race:

         Wood Elf

Link to your accepted MA:

        https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/224291-seer-ma-ztrog/?do=findComment&comment=1970846

What magic(s) will you be teaching?

         Seer of Vassek

Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:

Seer magic is, by definition, freeform and flexible, designed to mix and integrate with whichever unique nice and group the player is a member of. All of this is enabled and augmented by its base skills, which are found in Slot 1 - charade being a cornerstone of the arsenal to enable such tricks they can perform.

The themes of Seer focus around fear and delusion, as well as perversion and the illusion of control. Seers are not immune to this in any way. They are the focus of their own falsehoods, committing themselves and unconsciously placing faith in Vaasek in their eagerness to regain sight. This already plays into their deception, because every space committed to Vaasek is irreversible and causes them to delude themselves. That is always the eventual objective, ignorant service to an unheard deity from which no seer completely escapes; especially not the most devoted, for upon their passage to the soul stream, they are transformed into another Witness in Pax, silent of personality and any of what they once were.

The purpose for Seer is through the facets of delusion and deception. A blinded character through their own desperation latch onto the power of Vaasek unknowingly getting their own false conclusions as to how they gain powers over the mind. The magic allowing them to craft and manipulate those around their into kabals for their own design trickery and deception being their best tools and the like. That being how they sow chaos and attempt to grab control over others with this deceptions.

Though Slotted Seers are distinct from Feat Seers, interaction between the two is common, as teaching Seers may (with the seer's OOC consent) gain visions of the new seer, all in order to spread Vaasek's delusions and goals, and keep the Descendants blind to the harsh reality and His existence.
 

It should be noted that all Seers are bound by three main tenets. They are unable to break them and should they, the Seer will be deemed unworthy by Vaasek and with thusly be disconnected. In this they lose their powers completely. 

The three tenents are:

-Seers cannot betray each other or cause harm to another Seer.

-They are unable to reveal themselves as a Seer.

-They are unable to out another seer, their plots, or anything of the like to other descendants that are not under Vaasek.

Additionally, with the mention of Vaasek, it goes without saying that they are the means in which a Seer is given power. Vaasek well send out those who are known as Witnesses to find descendants to turn into Seers. These people must be blind, either born or have become blind in life and are often desperate to have their sight back. And Vaasek typically even makes these Seers for the sole reason of becoming his unknowing spies both in life and in death. Even the Seers themselves are in the dark of his existence and involvement Seers typically work through manipulation and try to pull strings behind the scenes. While their magic is deity by definition, they typically dwell in darker works. Regardless of what they intend to do, they try to do so in secret, working with the webs of people they have networked with.

Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?

Technically speaking there are not any subsections of this magic, however, it is split among benign a fea, 1 slotted, and 2 slotted. A feat seer do not get any abilities except for that of gaining their passive sight which is limited. A 1 slot TA is where the Seer will have access to most of the spells such as; Dilated Secondsight, Blindsight, Caecic, Polyglot, Panoramic Spy, Appraise, Charade, Spot Energy, Eyebite, Piercing Gaze, Hypnotic Gaze, Reading, Sow Fallacy, Cultivate Fallacy.

It is then by dedicating a 2nd magic slot to the magic where the seer has the ritual of Sanctioning performed upon them again to dedicate such they get further power from Vassek. This will give the sanctioned Seer the spells; Invisible Hands, Dreamstride, Scry, Truesight, Consecration, Divination, Ritual of Mendacity, Ritual of Identity, Ritual of Sanctioning. To get the Ritual of Sanctioning the Seer must also undergo a third ritual of sanctioning. 

Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?

Panoramic Spy

Seraphina crossed her arms before herself, hearing a sound behind her, she found her sight would not quite be enough for her to see. Around her eyes tendrils of purple energies would buzz, creating a purple phantasm. Her vision would suddenly become displaced. An out-of-body experience of her sight unfolds as she then gains a new view of what is behind her. 

Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?

Ritual of Sanctioning

Seraphina would be stood opposed to her soon-to-be student who was sat down, gazing upon one other. She lofts up her hands, ethereal purple energies glow from her hands and eyes. Arcing around the two would be forming the purple phantasms. “I require your hand.” She utters out.

[Student Emote]

Upon taking her student's hand, the arcing phantasm took the formation of a snake. The purple energies entwine, shaping its way around the extended hand and arm of Seraphina’s student. A sense of unease and the feeling of being watched would become most potent around the affected student. 

[Student Emote] 

With an act of finality Seraphina brings her luminous hans to the skies above the two. As the phastasmal forces weave around her student, the purple power seeps into their very flesh with a bright flash of luminous phantasms now imbuing them with the vast powers of the future sight. 

Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?

I would most likely Dm them and ask them exactly what they did and how they emoted the spell in question, that is if I had not seen such happen firsthand. Regardless if it had happened on purpose or on accident I’d try to help tell them where they had gone wrong with emoting such if they would be willing to listen to what I had to say on the matter. After such events, I would want to talk to a St telling them the situation if they had told me about such thing. If they had not and my student refused to listen to me I would tell a St about such things so they would be handled accordingly.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

         Nope

MC Name:

         Ztrog

Character's Name:

         Seraphina

Character's Age:

         Old

Character's Race:

         Wood Elf

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Mysticism

Teacher's MC Name:

         White_Wolf

Teacher's RP Name:

         The Caretaker

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

unless it is compatible then its being kept

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

This just seems like a silly attempt to tunnel focus what this should be compared to how nice and freeform it is otherwise. Making this over just reporting abuse seems rather odd as well.

Woah a good rendition of Lightning evo? Lets go +1

MC Name:

         GhostyMirage

Character's Name:

         Juliette de Silva

Character's Age:

         Old

Character's Race:

         High Elf

Link to your accepted MA:

        https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/218655-paladinism-ma-ghostymirage/?tab=comments#comment-1947938

What magic(s) will you be teaching?

         Paladinism

Describe this magic or a creature as a whole:

Paladinism is a divine magic that is a 3-slot magic gained from the Angeul of Order Xan. With holy magic, the magic and spells are frequently built on the forces of light and order. One of the most important responsibilities of a paladin is to hunt out and destroy the powers of Darkspawn and other creatures of darkness and depravity. Azdrazi, Naztherax, and the Mystics, to mention a few, are frequently found in this role. As a paladin, one of their extra goals is to safeguard the generations from such threats.

Being linked to the mighty forces of Xan is no easy achievement; doing so will ignite the paladin's soul with the Mists of Xan, producing the embers inside. The paladin feels a warmth similar to a welcoming family hearth when the embers burn within their souls, but when using such magics against the Darkspawn, it causes sensations and effects similar to burning. Paladins can even have small healing benefits on other descendants with their patron's favor.

Becoming a paladin is not a simple route to take; there are several difficulties and tribulations involved. But one of the most important considerations for a paladin is adherence to the Creed. This Creed is the guidance that the holy warrior must follow, similar to a Knight's Code, except that the Creed is far more binding than a knight's code. If the paladin disregards the rule or simply goes against it, there will be numerous severe consequences, including the holy warriors' own disconnection from Xan's abilities. Only the most sincere repentance can help rekindle one's ember if they are found worthy.

All this divine power and glory does not come without conflict, however. The paladins have one Unspoken Weakness, one that is much more grant than any blade. Due to the nature of the void being anti=creationit holds power over the servants of Light. Xannic mist can be nullified by the magic, the protection of a Vinddictator ward against magic even bypassing counting as hits to its durability. Voidal Horrors and Voidal beings as a whole can take away that warmth held within the paladin, leaving them demoralized and fearful. 

Sacred Artificery, the Paladin's kind of enchanting, is divided into Blessings and Orisons (and, in extreme situations, Exaltations). Blessings, which may be obtained by etching runes and maintaining one's pious devotion to the Dawnfather, offer modest passive or active benefits through spells or prayers, whereas Orisons are combat-oriented enchantments that allow the manufacture of weapons and shields using lightstones.

With a hint of finality, there is the act of Chanceries;  they are the great shrines forged out to their deific lord Xan. There are dark mages within its radiance that will be depowered to a degree and also allow Paladin to do various things, such as connecting new students, the purging ritual, and more. There are different levels of chanceries as well; shrines, temples, or sanctuaries (T1, T2, or T3 chanceries). Taking a chancery to the next level necessitates connecting a certain number of students. T3 Paladins can be graduated by chanceries at T2 dependent on the trial they accomplished, Vindicator or Wyrmstalker. A ceremony involving six individual paladins and the chancery's founder, as well as a sacrifice and reliquary, is required to progress a T2 chancery to T3. Aand it should be noted these hollowed grounds can be used to commune with Xan himself in events and the like

Are there different sections or subsections of magic? Can those be elaborated upon?

Vindicators

The Vindicators are the Order of Xan's bulwark. They are the Paladins' great defenders, functioning as a barrier against the Darkspawn menace. When dealing with such things, the Vindicators utilize spells that function as walls and shields, as well as light to knock their opponents off the battlefield. These fonts of protective might are as satiated great defender differing from how their Wymstalker brethren act being knee-deep in combat. They hold the following spells: Guardian’s Bulwark, Vindication, Marian’s Refuge, Arknight’s Rally, and Vindicator’s Mantle along with other Mist Weaving spells.

Wyrmstalking

Wyrmstalkers are the Order of Xan's apex hunters, dealing with ranged attacks using spells bestowed upon them by the Angeul. They are the archetypal master of ranged weaponry, wielding bows and thunderous holy lances. As mythical hunters, they frequently employ their Ambuscade rune to entrap their darkspawn victims. They are very much the hunters as oppose to what a Vindicator deals with and have access to the following spells: Henryk’s Binding, Stalker’s Step, Sunlit Volley, Daybreak Spear, and Sunlight Spear

Can you give an example of a casting emote, of a spell of your choice?

Sunlit Splint

Juliette knelt down next to the injured man, taking hold of his wrist she’d to examine the small 5 centimeters in depth and a few inches in width. Woman would let out a breath as he summoned his mists.

The mists of Juliette would begin to lick down from her fingers basking within the small open cut on the man, The mist mingling within the wound, slowly the blood flow beginning to clot, halting it from spilling all together from the open wound. 

Juliette furrowed her brows some, holding his hand steady as the mist continued to ebb and flow around the wound, slowly beginning to make the skin tissue around it close itself, where the open wound once was leaving scarred tissue in its wake. 

Juliette would then take her hand away, the mists seeping away from the now closed-up wound, coming to a stand once more with a faint sigh, her mists dispersing as the magic had done its work. “Be more careful, I won't always be here to fix you.”

Can you give an example of a teaching-emote (interacting with another) of a spell of your choice?

Xannic Armaments

Juliette would look up at her student Boyce arms crossed over her chest as she looked him over expectantly. “Summon your mists.” Shed order. “This spell will allow vous to create vous-même a weapon wherever vous may need it le most.” She places her arms behind her back awaiting her student patiently. 

Boyce lets out a breath, furrowing his brows, the man lifts his hands as sweat initially beads along his brow. With twitching fingers the golden mists of  Xan would billow out all around him formlessly, making no distinct shapes. 

Juliette smiles, bobbing her head happily as he does such. “Bonne, very bonne.” She commends. “Now, shape out vous mists, et keep in mind of vous weapon vous hold dear.” She directs with one held-up digit. “Remember to think on vous feelings within, our lords light.” 

Boyce then places one hand at his wrist as he gains focus, the auric mists all around him would furl and billow like a twister around his palm. In a display of holy might a radiant weapon of pure mists, a longsword would be forged out from the might of Xan. He looks over to Juliette, only to see his master beaming with approval. 

Say your student powergames during or after teaching, how do you reprimand that?

I would most likely Dm them and ask them exactly what they did and how they emoted the spell in question, that is if I had not seen such happen firsthand. Regardless if it had happened on purpose or on accident I’d try to help tell them where they had gone wrong with emoting such if they would be willing to listen to what I had to say on the matter. After such events, I would want to talk to a St telling them the situation if they had told me about such thing. If they had not and my student refused to listen to me I would tell a St about such things so they would be handled accordingly.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep the ST updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Have you applied to teach this magic on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app.

         Nope

43 minutes ago, femurlord said:

Longevity and lifespan doesn't work, you're forced to age, but Corcitura is still compatible. Age and appearance is a feature of necromancy, you're limited to your base Descendant life-span. You would have to die, if you didn't drop it, but I will give the option to those who have strong feelings about this post.

Right, well if there is the option to drop necromancy in response to this if it is accepted. I would fine that to be a nice option all things considered for those like in my position.

In the case of vampires longevity not being effective anymore. Is this just for appearance wise or the lifespan itself. If so I as a human vampire already was over human age limit since of vampirism even before connecting to necromancy. If this is passed would that means I would either A) Have to drop Necro entirely or B) don't choose to drop it therefore I will have to pk?

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They be mine! 3/3

I like the vibe and it seems very cool all in all without being overpowered! +1

Somewhere a short highlander would let out a mock gasp. "Oh nae, not the Opium what will they have now!"

Mine mine mine! 3/3

MC Name:

         Ztrog

Character's Name:

         Seraphina

Character's Age:

         Old

What feat(s) will you be learning?

         Sintel's Smoggers

Teacher's MC Name:

         Creete

Teacher's RP Name:

         Caliana Ashwood

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your feat app?:

         Yes

Have you applied for this feat on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         N/A

Are you aware that if this feat is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

Khuvulaav

Spirit of the Shooting Stars

(Lesser of Aztran)

"Have you ever wished upon a star?"

     Laid within the grand palace of the Moonlit Land, Seraphina would have entered the spiritual realms with the Primarch. Through lush fields of luminescent flora and glowing trees she followed the path. The vast stars filled skies of the lands before the wood elfess, she steels herself as she moved further into this plane, unknown by her.

     Then in a display most brilliant, a shoot stars streaks across the grand cosmos of the skies above. The grandiose display hits the luminous grand where star dust and light collects into a large twelve foot fox like being. It spoke in the olden tongue to the 'ame back and forth before it had leapt forth to her.

     The spirits head would lower, pure white luminous hues leveled to Seraphina's eyes as she kept herself steady. The terms were made, and thus the pact was therefore set in place.

"A shrine shall be built in your name oh Keeper of Wishes, and know that your praise shall be spread dutifully."

MC Name:

         Ztrog

Character's Name:

         Seraphina

Character's Age:

         Old

Character's Race:

         Wood Elf

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Farseer

Teacher's MC Name:

         Creete

Teacher's RP Name:

         Lavaelyn Maiheiuh

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

I helped make this fella