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  1. 3lWKVOWk1mOalPWSI9ZXqbMq9BIswN9utAr-dO6jb142l8PrwGrbrd-9W0lrllP7fX36VrPOKyXCJva2phJkFvSQ4h7UzYFlmcRM1WClk7Hc2KXlG97MxBUVLTXB01fijub-ADgB

    Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

     


    After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

    I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.

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    Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

    • Your Skin is not up to server standards. Please fix it or find a new one via our Skin Archive
      https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
    • Your Physical Description has an unrealistic height-to-weight ratio. Realistically, a 6’2 man with ‘some muscle’ would weight around 150-170.
    • In your Character Biography, you state your character joined the Sutican government. This is not allowed, as any form of notoriety is discouraged to be written into a backstory. We encourage rank and prestige to be earned through roleplay. 
    • In your Character Biography, you state your character is ‘quite rich and well-known in private business circles as a very good executive and financial officer, as well as an outstanding lawyer’. This is not allowed, as any form of notoriety is discouraged to be written into a backstory. We encourage rank and prestige to be earned through roleplay. 

     

    When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

    If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

     

  3. Changed Status to Pending

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    Hello and congratulations- you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’ve been accepted, you will spawn in at Cloud Temple as a player and will be able to interact with the world around you. If you’d like any assistance, you can message me in game by /msg AccioNily or, if I am not online, messaging me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

     If you need any assistance in-game and I am not around, please type the command: /creq <What you need help with> and another Community Team member will assist you as soon as possible!

    After reading the below information and logging into Lord of the Craft, I strongly suggest typing this command in  chat so a Community Team member can help you out:

     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    When joining for the first time, our bot may be down that usually auto-whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. If this happens and you are still a Soul when you log in, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    It is strongly suggested that you join the Lord of the Craft Discord server if you haven’t already (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F).

    Additionally, I recommend browsing through the following links.

     


    New Player Guide - (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/). 

     

    Settlement information based on the interests of your character and/or character backstory- (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/192277-🌿-the-glade-of-siramenor-🌿/


    Settlement Guides - (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides)

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    Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

    • In your Character Biography, you state that your character was born (?) or had grown up in Siramenor. Since Siramenor is a relatively new settlement, I’d ask that you change this to something else, i.e your character was born somewhere unknown but moved to Siramenor, or your character’s parents dropped you at Siramenor when she was young.
      https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/192277-🌿-the-glade-of-siramenor-🌿/
    • In your Personality Traits/Quirks section, you are missing the required one negative trait Please add a negative trait when making revisions.

     

    When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

    If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

     

     

     


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    Hello and congratulations- you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’ve been accepted, you will spawn in at Cloud Temple as a player and will be able to interact with the world around you. If you’d like any assistance, you can message me in game by /msg AccioNily or, if I am not online, messaging me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

     If you need any assistance in-game and I am not around, please type the command: /creq <What you need help with> and another Community Team member will assist you as soon as possible!

    After reading the below information and logging into Lord of the Craft, I strongly suggest typing this command in  chat so a Community Team member can help you out:

     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    When joining for the first time, our bot may be down that usually auto-whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. If this happens and you are still a Soul when you log in, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    It is strongly suggested that you join the Lord of the Craft Discord server if you haven’t already (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F).

    Additionally, I recommend browsing through the following links.

     


    New Player Guide - (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/). 

     

    Settlement information based on the interests of your character and/or character backstory-
    (
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Commonwealth_of_Kaedrin

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Holy_Orenian_Empire

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mechanical_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Human_Settlement_Guides

     

    Settlement Guides - (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides


  6. 3lWKVOWk1mOalPWSI9ZXqbMq9BIswN9utAr-dO6jb142l8PrwGrbrd-9W0lrllP7fX36VrPOKyXCJva2phJkFvSQ4h7UzYFlmcRM1WClk7Hc2KXlG97MxBUVLTXB01fijub-ADgB

    Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple inconsistencies. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

     

    • Your Powergaming definition is incorrect. For help understanding, please visit out Wiki page. 
      https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

    • Your Physical Description does not match lore. Please see our Wiki page about Orcs to learn more about them if you intend to apply as an Orc again in the future.
      https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Orcs

    • Your Character Biography does not meet the required 10 sentence minimum, or have the required 2 lore references

    • Your Skin does not match your Physical Description. Please make sure your skin matches, and if you need help feel free to reference our Skin Archive.  
      https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks section does not have the required Negative Characteristic.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario is not quite what we are looking for. You need to include One piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes “ “ and one action, with a minimum of four lines of text.

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    After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

    I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.


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    Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to failing to make the required edits in time. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted: 

     

    • Everything mentioned in the previous Pending comment.
       


    After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

    I  recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.


  8. OpuNeypae0MFCiolcxxrXE9Htj7lRSrxm199euX7OhHb255JF-TxjCzRg1IhalUc5pSCDbaFcdIg3uLeTNz0hZBQr-JKv_20C7XZLYhMTREZQEwLtuNbYFsR4oZM6nCyM3jzK_n-

    Hello and congratulations- you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

     

    Now that you’ve been accepted, you will spawn in at Cloud Temple as a player and will be able to interact with the world around you. If you’d like any assistance, you can message me in game by /msg AccioNily or, if I am not online, messaging me over discord @AccioNily#0515.

     If you need any assistance in-game and I am not around, please type the command: /creq <What you need help with> and another Community Team member will assist you as soon as possible!

    After reading the below information and logging into Lord of the Craft, I strongly suggest typing this command in  chat so a Community Team member can help you out:

     

    /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    When joining for the first time, our bot may be down that usually auto-whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. If this happens and you are still a Soul when you log in, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!

     

    It is strongly suggested that you join the Lord of the Craft Discord server if you haven’t already (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F).

    Additionally, I recommend browsing through the following links.

     


    New Player Guide - (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/). 

     

    Settlement information based on the interests of your character and/or character backstory-

    (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides
    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mechanical_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Guilds_and_Organizations

     

    Settlement Guides - (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

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    Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

    • In your Character Biography, you state that your character’s father was from Siramenor. This would be incorrect, as Siramenor was only founded about two decades ago IRP. Please reference our Settlement Guides if you need help, or shoot me a DM via discord. 
      https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
    • Your Skin does not match your Physical Description. Please either fix it or find a new skin using the #new-player-skin-requests channel in our discord or our Skin Archive.
      https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
    • Your Roleplay Scenario does not meet the required four lines of text. Please alter this to add additional lines to meet the requirements.
    • Just tacking on an FYI, a character who is a mix of both High Elf (a relatively pale race) and Wood Elf (a relatively tan/dark race) would be somewhere in between. It seems your skin portrays your character as being too pale for her heritage. If you believe this to be a mistake, please feel free to clarify by shooting me a forum message or a DM via Discord.

     

    When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

    If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

    For additional help, please view the following wiki/forum links:

     

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides

    https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/190605-village-of-siramenor-settlement-guide/
     

     

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    Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted.  These are:

    • In your Character Biography, you state your character has moved to and is currently living in Curon. This is inaccurate, as Curon no longer exists. Please refer to our Settlement Guide if you need assistance choosing a new place to live in your backstory.
      https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Human_Settlement_Guides
      https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
    • In your Character Biography, you state that your character is 50 years old. However, this is contradictory to what your Character Age directly states. Please fix this.
    • In your Physical Description, you mention your character being 5’10 but only 50kg. This height-to-weight ratio is wildly inaccurate, even for a naturally thin individual. Please revisit this and change it.
    • In your Personality Traits/Quirks, you use the word ‘naughty’, which leads to some negative connotations. Lord of the Craft is a PG13 server, so please take care to avoid saying things that might break that rule.
    • Your Roleplay Scenario isn’t quite what we were looking for. It’s not a ‘what would you do long term’ question, but a ‘what in this very moment would your character say and/or do?’ If you need assistance with this, feel free to shoot me a DM via Discord.

     

    When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.

    If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).

    For additional help, please view the following wiki/forum links:

     

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Haense_Settlement_Guide

     

     

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