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Application Comments posted by teeylin
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted. These are:
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Your Character Biography mentions a place called ‘ArmaLuma’. To my knowledge, this is not a real place. Please change this to be somewhere on Arcas.
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If you believe this to be a mistake, please send me a message and provide the Wiki link where you found this place.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
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If you believe this to be a mistake, please send me a message and provide the Wiki link where you found this place.
When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.
If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).0 -
Your Character Biography mentions a place called ‘ArmaLuma’. To my knowledge, this is not a real place. Please change this to be somewhere on Arcas.
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted. These are:
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In our lore, elven fertility is a very rare thing. That being said, elves can normally give birth every 10-15 irp years. With that knowledge, your character and his brother are too close in age.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Curses
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Snow_Elves#Curses
When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.
If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).0 -
In our lore, elven fertility is a very rare thing. That being said, elves can normally give birth every 10-15 irp years. With that knowledge, your character and his brother are too close in age.
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not making the necessary changes in time. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted:
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Your Metagaming Definition needs to be stronger. For reference, please use our Wiki page.
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Your Character Biography needs a minimum of 10 sentences.
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Your Roleplay Scenario and Personality Traits/Quirks do not match up. You claim your character is a mute, but in the scenario he speaks.
After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.
I recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.Hijacking this application owo
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to failing to make all the changes in time. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted:
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Your Physical Description does not match your skin. Please alter it to match your skin, or find a new skin.
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Your Roleplay Scenario needs to be 4 lines long.
After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.
I recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.Hijacking this application owo
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to failing to make the proper revisions in time. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted:
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Everything in the above pending comment.
After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.
I recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.0 -
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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted. These are:
- In your Character Biography, you mention the Battle of Upper Rodenburg. This lore reference doesn’t really match up with your character on a timeline.
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Your Skin, while altered, is still not up to LotC standards. The outfit issue was resolved this time around, but the hair shading is still unacceptable. We try to avoid accepting skins that use excessive noise shading, which is what this one has. If you need assistance changing it, feel free to copy a head from our Skin Archive or send a message in our #new-player-skin-requests channel.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.
If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).0 -
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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted. These are:
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In your Character Biography, you mention the Teutonic Soldiers and the Teutonic Order, which are both very old and, as to my knowledge, do not exist anymore. Please alter this when making revisions. Seeing as this was one of the lore references you used, please put in another one to keep up the requirement of two. Reference our Wiki if you need help.
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please fix it or find a new one by visiting our Skin Archive.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.
If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).0 -
In your Character Biography, you mention the Teutonic Soldiers and the Teutonic Order, which are both very old and, as to my knowledge, do not exist anymore. Please alter this when making revisions. Seeing as this was one of the lore references you used, please put in another one to keep up the requirement of two. Reference our Wiki if you need help.
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Hello and congratulations- you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’ve been accepted, you will spawn in at Cloud Temple as a player and will be able to interact with the world around you. If you’d like any assistance, you can message me in game by /msg AccioNily or, if I am not online, messaging me over discord @AccioNily#0515.
If you need any assistance in-game and I am not around, please type the command: /creq <What you need help with> and another Community Team member will assist you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into Lord of the Craft, I strongly suggest typing this command in chat so a Community Team member can help you out:/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining for the first time, our bot may be down that usually auto-whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. If this happens and you are still a Soul when you log in, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
It is strongly suggested that you join the Lord of the Craft Discord server if you haven’t already (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F).
Additionally, I recommend browsing through the following links.
New Player Guide - (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).Mechanical Guide - (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Mechanical_Guides)
Settlement Guides - (https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides)
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to various issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted:
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks does not include the required three traits. Please add some when making another application.
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You are using the Skin of a character from Lord of the Rings. Please find a new skin via the internet (with the creator’s permission), or view our Skin Archive.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home - Your Character Biography mentions the War of the Lofty Woods. As far as I have been able to find, this does not exist in our lore. If you believe this to be a mistake, please DM me the link to the article you found this reference in.
- Your Character Biography mentions that your character’s tribe was wiped out and Gru-taf was ‘the sole survivor’. This is a common character troupe, and as such I advise you change this. If you need help or ideas, feel free to PM me.
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Your Roleplay Scenario, while meeting the requirements, does not adequately portray how an orc would speak. Please have a look at the orc language Blah and PM me with any questions.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Blah
After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.
I recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.0 -
Changed Status to Under Review
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Hello! Your application has been put on pending because there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted. These are:
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks does not have an adequate enough negative trait. Please alter this when making revisions.
- Your Character Biography has, as I see it, is either incorrectly phrased or contains some powergaming. ‘The physical strain of woodworking mas made me strong physically, allowing me to defend myself from any threats during my dangerous travels’ specifically. If you believe this to be a mistake, shoot me a message via Discord or the forums.
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Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, but needs to be stronger. Please reference our Wiki when revising.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
When you’ve finished making the necessary adjustments, please let me know by DMing me @AccioNily#0515 via Discord, or send me a forum message. If the changes are not made in 24 hours, your application will be denied.
If you need help, feel free to join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) and take a look at our New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/).
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to various issues. However, here are the things that would have to change to be accepted:
Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please refer to our Wiki page for help.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
Your Physical Description does not match your skin.
Furthermore, your Skin is not up to Lord of the Craft standards. Please refer to our Skin Archive next time for assistance.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
Your Personality Traits/Quirks should contain traits and quirks, not just likes/dislikes.
Your Character Biography has many issues:
You mention her birthplace being Caras Eldar, which is impossible given her age. Adding to that, Caras Eldar is from Atlas, another map.
‘Avery Birch, Peter Snow, and James Snow’ are unrealistic names for elves.
An orc who was previously very friendly towards someone attacking because ‘he accidentally went too long without sating his blood lust’ is also unrealistic.
You mention the Kingdom of Gladewynn, which also doesn’t match up with the current timeline.
After you change these things, feel free to reapply at any time by making a new application. If you’ve got questions, please DM me over discord @AccioNily#0515.
I recommended you take another look at the New Player Guide (https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/) and join the Lord of the Craft Discord server (https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F) for more information and/or help if you have not already.