seems alright, i agree that the redline should be deleted and just refer to ixris kid lore

"Weakness pervades her - She abandons." A constant companion to that White Cat, that Mother, seethed.

"Perhaps it is some long ruse?" That Cat returned in kind, her own tone amused.

"I would see a ruse in an instant." That companion snapped, "She waited until the flame could no longer be brought to her fingertips, and ran off with her little dragon toy."

"Awfully rude you're being." A hum, "We shall see just how far she goes."

josh moment

way to bait and switch llir on god

"Let it be known." That woman muttered, as she read the missive over.

"I, some coward, have caused the 'once great' to rally the world against me, and they still cannot do anything meaningful."

"Three out of three scores of men, and they view this as an achievement."

"What fun!" Came the cry of some Cockroach, as she read the missive.

"You find your home being raided fun?" Cried her shadow, four eyes peering.

"Oh, dear me." A tut.

"It is always fun."

"Looks a bit like a crow." Mused a reclusive woman, eyes scanning the missive, the icon having caught her eye, "He's lost his subtlety."

"It was never subtle." Remarked her companion, her prisoner, her power.

"I like this man." Was all the Prison had to say in return.

(This follows all redlines of Prophecy lore, allowing any who possess some way to glean the future to acquire the contents of this post, and only those individuals)

The first thing you notice is the near unbearable heat, as though you stood at the edge of the pits of the Hells yourself.

You thought you were in total darkness, but the light adjusted, and you stood in a small, stone room. Beneath the earth, before an altar of black stone. Atop it sat a feline - A housecat, seemingly, with fur of pure white. A glow from its eyes, a wound at its heart.

Blood pooled at your feet.

Words rang in your ears, as the room came alight, a crimson fire beneath the animal. Engulfing it, but not consuming it.

“The Eye gazes upon the world.”

You felt as though this animal could see through you.

“The White Cat gathers her hunters.”

An image appeared in the flame. A bovine skull.

Empty sockets are somehow filled with hate to rival every man to have ever lived.

“The child of crimson has grown, the snow melts beneath her feet.”

That animal grew before you, mutating. That blood from its chest came out in a font - Eternal bleeding, the puddle at your feet reached your ankles.

A beast of unnatural ferocity stood, bearing teeth to rival a lion’s.

That heat continued.

“The Mother of Calamity approaches.” Rang that voice, clear and true, “To usher her Children.”

Your perspective shifted, and you stood within the ashes of a razed city. The architecture was unfamiliar, as was the garb of the charred corpses that littered the streets.

The only standing being was a woman with two heads, four beams of light bursting from behind her. Dressed in red, she spoke.

“The First Seal is broken.” Came a choir of voices, before all went to black.

You awoke, drenched in sweat. The image of a cat’s eye scorched into your mind. 

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blows off TA
all people currently listed (besides apotolofo) can be taken off

The Moderation team has come to an agreement that it would be in your best interest to put some more effort into your appeal. We are looking for signs that you plan to change, and know that your actions were unacceptable.

Could you state the justification behind these changes? I don't see why some constructs would be affected by wither as you've written here.

I would entirely disagree with locking combat earlier, even with both sides agreeing to do so. It feels outside of the nature of a server that has the intention of dynamic roleplay, which means that someone uninvited could very well stumble upon your duel and become an entirely new conflict to encounter and deal with.

8 minutes ago, wowj said:

it says they are weaker to malflame

 

misread, my bad. also you mispelled it maleflame

Not to be Naztherak on top, but I would like to see a more tangible reason as to why Sorvians are immune to malflame, as other constructs with souls (or portions of those) within them are still affected in full.

2 hours ago, PrinceJose270 said:

 

-For ease of tracking, a devil must be validated by a feat application which lists the source of their curse (cursed parents, naztherak or ST event characters under ‘teacher’) as well as their underlying race.


No idea if the ''cursed parents'' apply to two cursed children or one having a kid. But otherwise, Its either by a st creature or one playing around with Naztherak magic

 

Cursed parents refers to the people cursed to have a cursed child. Under the current lore, two cursed children do not create more cursed children.

+1, very good flavor

6 minutes ago, sarahbarah said:

Queen Amaya sits in her bedchambers and blinks back tears, utterly distraught by the public slander. Perhaps her heart had gotten the better of her, when she had shown kindness to the cursed children, whom she wished to show GOD’s holy light.

 

She sets out to pen a letter, writing to Holy Ser Gerard;

 

”Holy Ser,

 

It pains me so that you would berate my name so publically after my willingness to share information about these children that I sought to cure. I lent you a space in my palace to further your research, and it seems my efforts are met with naught.”

Should you wish to investigate me, do so. There is nothing I have to hide. I am still looking tor a cure. Find me if you wish for my aid.”

 

- Amaya of Venzia

I helped make this

MC Name:

         TimberBuff

Character's Name:

         Sarryn

Character's Age:

         Old enough

Character's Race:

         High elf

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         Seer

Teacher's MC Name:

         Orphvius

Teacher's RP Name:

         Julianne

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

A neat idea, with one major comment - Specify limits on foodstuffs. Via this lore, you could have a single chocolate chip cookie that has the effects of three potions when consumed, and people aren't going to strip you of a cookie at the gates. Even with it taking 9 emotes, that's rather powerful.

While I'm not a fan of the concept (I think people get too caught up in "this would be cute" animal lore like this and duufles to really think about what rp they bring to the server), I have a couple critiques

The BIG one is the stated background for their existing. Someone did a ferret breeding program to make them larger and more aggressive? You could do better, imo, incorporate it into a preexisting, even if minor, lore that would make it more interesting than just a breeding program.

The fact that it's really just "big ferret" with nothing else really going for it is kind of boring, and I'd encourage you to add some more interactivity with the world of LOTC in specific, and not think of it in a vacuum.

You've stated in a previous reply that these things can wear steel armor, which is a lot more powerful than you think, and has been a stated reason for other creature lore being denied. I'd think on this.

Remember that lore, as a whole, is a collaborative effort. Making large ferrets is a great thing for a base idea, but if you want to see it used outside of just people who like ferrets, think about how these things can be worked into a story. I wish you luck in the loremag.