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Application Comments posted by MRCHENN
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
Before I go into those, I noticed that you had a question about finding lore. I get that sometimes browsing through it all can be confusing, trust me I’ve been there. But below I’ve linked a couple helpful wiki pages to include lore about settlements and lore about any specific nation you’d like!
→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on track, but you must include an example for both. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
→ For new applicants, races other than humans must have an age between 18 and 100. Your age goes beyond that. Make sure to update your character biography to reflect that age!
→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! You only have 1, you’re very close! But please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord: Chenn#6807 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.0 -
Changed Status to Under Review
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on track, but you must include an example for both. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
→ Your Fear section must be two sentences long, try to add more detail on it. Currently, you have one sentence.
→ In your Physical Description, your character mentions that he wears a Haense Royal Army uniform. However, in order to join this army, you would have to enlist in roleplay, otherwise your character wouldn’t have the uniform, especially since you can’t use the HRA skin without permission. Since you haven’t been accepted into roleplay yet, this would be invalid.
→ In your Roleplay Scenario Response, please refrain from projecting ANY thoughts into emotes. Emotes should only include what others would see, not what your character is thinking. Furthermore, your Roleplay Scenario Response only has three sentences. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
→ The link to your skin doesn’t work. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord Chenn#6807 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.0 -
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to these reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Your references seem to be from Lord of the Rings, but not the lore from Lord of the Craft. Just to note: this server isn’t an LOTR server, so it has different lore. Here are some links that may help you find some!
Furthermore, your Character Biography is almost there! You have 9 sentences. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
→ Lastly, for Character Biography, please refrain from using a common character trope, like “parents killed by humans” or “parents killed by bandits or orcs”!
→ In regards to your Personality Traits/Quirks (Biggest Fear), you talk about a dragon your character heard about in Erebor. However, since Erebor is from Lord of the Rings, and isn’t part of the lore from Lord of the Craft, this would be invalid. I would suggest looking at the above links for more info about this!
→ Your Dislikes are a bit lacking, as you only specify one thing your character dislikes about themselves, but two are required. Please include one more thing your character dislikes about himself, and why.
→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue (in quotes) and one action/emote.
→ Your skin seems to be noise shaded, and it has mismatching eyes, which doesn’t match up to the description of dwarves. I’d suggest taking a look into LOTC’s skin archive!: https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord Chenn#6807, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/0 -
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