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    TheBannerlord

    in Accepted

    Posted

     

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now,  We welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

     

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    ✦Enjoy the Roleplay✦

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

     

     

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    TheBannerlord

    in Accepted

    Posted

     

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Character Biography did not have any lore references. Please include at least 2 lore references. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences, be in the third person long, and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes and one action!

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

     

     

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    NextGorgon56

    in Accepted

    Posted

    I1-f3o8fy1Axi3OVv7nb3g-youIw1HaM9740-qsbFh1j23AgGs-fXJXTlzJwpiw5bh1NtqwwEf9DxPFHdQUMIvpsZN9Ns6S4RSeHjzRD7GZ_jYKt8jgDlnuufeMn7FkjvMvBErTP

    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now,  We welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

     

    ✦Enjoy the Roleplaying✦

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    NextGorgon56

    in Accepted

    Posted

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions were correct but you need to use examples. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

     

     

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards because it is in use of noise shading and skin tone, as well as it does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    (you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

    https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

    (please also refer to the Chart below for skin tones)

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    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    X_Sennie_X

    in Denied

    Posted

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


     

    • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions were correct but you need to use examples. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

     

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

     

    • Your Character Biography did not have any lore references. Please include at least 10 sentences and 2 lore references. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)           

     

    (down below are some links that can help you with your next application)

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

     

    • Your character’s biggest fear must include a reason I suggest elaborating on this in your biography as well


     

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards as well as it does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    (you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

    https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

    (please also refer to the Chart below for skin tones)

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    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! 

     

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    PattyRick827

    in Denied

    Posted

     

    zNdX-0tyj6HxPQ-zdo0WikASlaBQCPmM4VO2kEnbnzHGy5vjFwQXKQrpQbA3CGH3XcdIedRCw73pMH6mD6u6KZK2b5wOLY0pkgHGBxpO-XmfP-LaZSyjwUVWuMazcm-ZODL9SUgD

    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

     

    • Your Character Biography did not have any lore references. Please include at least 10 sentences and 2 lore references. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT) 

    (P.s. England is not a location on LOTC)            

     

    (down below are some links that can help you with your next application)

     

    • Your character’s biggest fear must include a reason I suggest elaborating on this in your biography as well

     

     

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards as well as it does not match your physical description (Your eye colour). Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

     

    • Please also remember the next time you apply to put your time zone

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! 

     

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    Buccaneer_Fish

    in Denied

    Posted

    zNdX-0tyj6HxPQ-zdo0WikASlaBQCPmM4VO2kEnbnzHGy5vjFwQXKQrpQbA3CGH3XcdIedRCw73pMH6mD6u6KZK2b5wOLY0pkgHGBxpO-XmfP-LaZSyjwUVWuMazcm-ZODL9SUgD

    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

     

    • Your Character Biography was a bit short and did not have any lore references. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT) 

     

    • Your Character Biography did not have any lore references when you re-apply please include 2 lore references  .                    

     

    (down below are some links that can help you with your next application)

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

      

     

    •  Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

     

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    rebelvador

    in Denied

    Posted


    zNdX-0tyj6HxPQ-zdo0WikASlaBQCPmM4VO2kEnbnzHGy5vjFwQXKQrpQbA3CGH3XcdIedRCw73pMH6mD6u6KZK2b5wOLY0pkgHGBxpO-XmfP-LaZSyjwUVWuMazcm-ZODL9SUgD

    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

     

    • Your Character Biography was a bit short and did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 10 sentences and 2 lore references. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)                         

     

    (down below are some links that can help you with your next application)

     

     

     

    • You also did not mention if you have roleplayed before or not please fill this in on your next application.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

     

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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