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    Dagabdoo

    in Accepted

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now,  We welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

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    ✦Enjoy the Roleplay✦

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIK

    IF YOU NEED STARTER HELP (SUCH AS LEARNING COMMANDS) JUST /creq FOR MONK HELP

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    Dagabdoo

    in Accepted

    Posted

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Character Biography did not have any lore references. Please include at least 6 sentences and 2 lore references. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT) 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

    ✦You have 24 hours to make the needed changes✦

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    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

     

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    Dagabdoo

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    • Your Character Biography did not have any lore references. Please include at least 6 sentences and 2 lore references. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT) 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

     

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards because it is to modern-looking, as well as it does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    (you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

    https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

    ✦You have 24 hours to make the needed changes✦

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    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

     

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    Gnorst

    in Denied

    Posted

     

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards (due to modern clothing). Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

    • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.
       

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 
       

    • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!
       

    • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!
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      Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! 

      Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

      Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    Sora_Tokidaso

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

     

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now,  We welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

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    ✦Enjoy the Roleplay✦

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIK

    IF YOU NEED STARTER HELP (SUCH AS LEARNING COMMANDS) JUST /creq FOR MONK HELP

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    BlockRocker9

    in Denied

    Posted

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 1 lore references and 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
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    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! 

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    JxshuaIsConfused

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now,  We welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

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    ✦Enjoy the Roleplay✦

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIK

    IF YOU NEED STARTER HELP (SUCH AS LEARNING COMMANDS) JUST /creq FOR MONK HELP

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    libranotfound

    in Denied

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review


     

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

    • Your Character Biography did not have any lore references. Please include at least 1 lore references and 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)
      (Also, please don't refer to computers as they do not exist on lotc)

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
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    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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    ElbowicCamo

    in Accepted

    Posted

    Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now,  We welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

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    ✦Enjoy the Roleplay✦

    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIK

    IF YOU NEED STARTER HELP (SUCH AS LEARNING COMMANDS) JUST /creq FOR MONK HELP

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