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    Hi friend, your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to may errors and mistakes.

    You can always reapply with the right corrections!

     

    Here are the mistakes you need to fix if you wish to reapply:


    Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.
    I recommend using a free grammar checker such as
    Grammarly.

     

    Your Roleplay Definition is a little short, please add more detail.

     

    Your Character Biography is using lore that is NOT from our server.

     Please add an LotC lore reference.

    Please take a look at the following links to see the lore of the server:

    Almaris | Races | Nations

     

    Your Personality Traits/Quirks is a little short, please add more detail.

    It needs to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
    This can be your persona’s fears, how they act around people, how they typically feel, etc.

     

    Your Character Achievement is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

    Please explain why and what your character wants to achieve in greater detail.

     

    Your Character Fear is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

    It should also explain why your character developed this fear in greater detail.

     

    Your Roleplay Scenario should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.

    It also needs at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one. The response must be in the 3rd Person.

     

    Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like:

    Skin Archive Site

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time.

    If you have any questions you can message me through the forums or message me through discord: dove#8701

    Or you can ask for help in the LOTC Discord

  2. Changed Status to Denied

    deltadeniedmesssage.png

    Hi friend, your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to may errors and mistakes.

    You can always reapply with the right corrections!

     

    Here are the mistakes you need to fix if you wish to reapply:


    ⚘ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.
    I recommend using a free grammar checker such as 
    Grammarly.

     

    ⚘ Your Roleplay Definition is a little short, please add more detail.

     

    ⚘ Your Character Biography is missing, please add one. It also must be in the 3rd person.

    Please take a look at the following links to see the lore of the server:

    Almaris | Races | Nations

     

    ⚘ Your Personality Traits/Quirks is a little short, please add more detail.

    It needs to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
    This can be your persona’s fears, how they act around people, how they typically feel, etc.

     

    ⚘ Your Character Achievement is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

    Please explain why and what your character wants to achieve in greater detail.

     

    ⚘ Your Character Fear is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

    It should also explain why your character developed this fear in greater detail.

     

    ⚘ Your Roleplay Scenario should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.

    It also needs at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one. The response must be in the 3rd Person.

     

    ⚘ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like:

    Skin Archive Site

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time.

    If you have any questions you can message me through the forums or message me through discord: dove#8701

    Or you can ask for help in the LOTC Discord

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    Congratulations! You’ve been accepted to Lord of the Craft!

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you.

     

    If you need any help, you can message me in-game by doing /msg worldeltaii

    Or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord: dove#8701

     

    If you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do: /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
    Another Community Team member will come by and assist you. Or follow the signs heading to the Tutorial Island.

     

    And lastly, I highly recommend you join the LOTC discord using the invite link: LOTC Discord

    And checking out the New Player Guide: New Player Hub Post

     

    Happy roleplaying friend!

  4. deltacceptedmesssage.png

    Congratulations! You’ve been accepted to Lord of the Craft!

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you.

     

    If you need any help, you can message me in-game by doing /msg worldeltaii

    Or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord: dove#8701

     

    If you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do: /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
    Another Community Team member will come by and assist you. Or follow the signs heading to the Tutorial Island.

     

    And lastly, I highly recommend you join the LOTC discord using the invite link: LOTC Discord

    And checking out the New Player Guide: New Player Hub Post

     

    Happy roleplaying friend!

  5. deltadeniedmesssage.png

    Hi friend, your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to may errors and mistakes.

    You can always reapply with the right corrections!

     

    Here are the mistakes you need to fix if you wish to reapply:


    Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.
    I recommend using a free grammar checker such as
    Grammarly.

     

    Your Roleplay Definition is a little short, please add more detail.

     

    Your Character Biography is a little short, please add more detail. It also must be in the 3rd person

     

    Your Physical Description is a little short, please add more detail.

    This can be your persona’s height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. 

    The description needs to be purely physical. Try to avoid describing your persona’s personality.

     

    Your Personality Traits/Quirks is a little short, please add more detail.

    It needs to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
    This can be your persona’s fears, how they act around people, how they typically feel, etc.

     

    Your Character Achievement Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

    Please explain why and what your character wants to achieve.

     

    Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long.

    It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

     

    Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.

    It also needs at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one. The response must be in the 3rd Person.

     

    After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time.

    If you have any questions you can message me through the forums or message me through discord: dove#8701

    Or you can ask for help in the LOTC Discord

     

     

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    Hi friend! You're almost there, your app needs some fixing and editing.

    You have 24 hours from now to make the following changes:

     

    ⚘ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.

    I highly recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.


    Your Personality Traits/Quirks is a little short. Please add more detail.

    This can be your persona’s fears, how they act around people, how they typically feel, etc.

     

    ⚘ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short.

    It has to be in the 3rd person. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one action.

     

    If you need help with your application, feel free to message me on the forums or through discord: dove#8701

    Or you can ask for help in the LOTC Discord

     

    Good luck friend!

  7. deltacceptedmesssage.png

    Congratulations! You’ve been accepted to Lord of the Craft!

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you.

     

    If you need any help, you can message me in-game by doing /msg worldeltaii
    Or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord: dove#8701

     

    If you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do: /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

    Another Community Team member will come by and assist you. Or follow the signs heading to the Tutorial Island.

     

    And lastly, I highly recommend you join the LOTC discord using the invite link: LOTC Discord Link
    And checking out the New Player Guide: New Player Hub Post


    Happy roleplaying friend!

  8. deltacceptedmesssage.png

    Congratulations! You’ve been accepted to Lord of the Craft!

    Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you.

     

    If you need any help, you can message me in-game by doing /msg worldeltaii
    Or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord: dove#8701

     

    If you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do: /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!

     

    Another Community Team member will come by and assist you. Or follow the signs heading to the Tutorial Island.

     

    And lastly, I highly recommend you join the LOTC discord using the invite link: LOTC Discord Link
    And checking out the New Player Guide: New Player Hub Post
     

    Happy roleplaying friend!

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