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Application Comments posted by beetle
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Hi friend, your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to may errors and mistakes. You can always reapply with the right corrections!
Here are the mistakes you need to fix if you wish to reapply:
Your Character Biography is using lore that does not exist on the server. Please take a look at the following links to see the lore of the server:
Almaris Link | Races Link | Nations Link
Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, but isn’t quite right. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help:
Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like:
Skin Archive SiteYour Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.
It also needs at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one. The response must be in the 3rd Person.
Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.
I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly:
Grammarly.com
After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time.
If you have any questions you can message me through the forums or message me through discord: dove#8701
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Hi friend, your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference and contains wording that would make them well known - them killing someone - and a bit graphic. Sadly, you have to remove this.Please remember to include at least one. This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some:
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_ChartersYour Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_PowergamingPlease fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability.
I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
https://app.grammarly.com/After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time.
If you have any questions you can message me through the forums or message me through discord: dove#8701
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Congratulations! You’ve been accepted to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you.
If you need any help, you can message me in-game by doing /msg worldeltaii
Or if I’m not online, you can find me on discord: dove#8701If you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do: /creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
Another Community Team member will come by and assist you. Or follow the signs heading to the Tutorial Island.
And lastly, I highly recommend you join the LOTC discord using the invite link: LOTC Discord Link
And checking out the New Player Guide: New Player Hub Post
Happy roleplaying friend!0 -
Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
- Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/
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Your Character’s Dream and Fear is too short. It must be at least four sentences long with more detail.
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
My discord is dove#8701! Or you can message me through the forums!
If you have any questions I'm happy to help!
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!
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Changed Status to Under Review
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senturian2020
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Changed Status to Denied