Zanael Moonstrider

MC Name:

         Zanael

Character's Name:

         Patches

Character's Age:

         20

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         N/A

Transformed form:

         Musin

Creator's MC Name:

         N/A

Creator's RP Name:

         N/A

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

Musin descended from the runts of Ratiki. Usually abandoned or used as slaves, Runts didn't last very long. During the Second Great Ratiki war, the Xetrialkian military recruited runts. One of them was dubbed 'Musin the Brave' and became a Warchief. Musin lead his group and four hundred runt slaves to freedom during the Battle of Red Vale, sacrificing himself to allow the others to escape. When the newly dubbed Musin arrived in a new land The Giant taught them Hygiene, speech, writing and more. Finally passing on his strength, forever changing the Musin.

The species no longer has fangs and are still typically in the height range between1'8" to 2'6" and have long tails around 3 inches or so in length. Weight ranges from 20 to 30 pounds if Healthy. Their Eyes are most commonly black but occasionally pink and red variants appear. Fur can be any colour that the common house mouse can be. Which also includes the fancy mouse variety. Which is any combination of white, grey, brown, black, orange and tan.

Musin can live up to 70 years old if healthy.

Since Musin are shorter and weaker than most other races, they are unable to lift certain things due to their lack of strength, yet their dexterity is one of their only proper strengths.

Musin are quite clean, have an urge to scavenge Possibly even thieve materials and recycle them into something new.

They are curious at heart and always craving adventure.

Musin have sensitive eyesight daylight (24 blocks) and fully in cloudy days or nights (48 blocks). They also have advanced hearing of 15hz to 20khz and don't lose the ability to hear higher frequencies. Loud and sudden noises tend to startle Musin.

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

A brown, Frizzie furred mouse. They have white blending into cream fur around the mouth area. They tend to wear clothes that seem to be something akin to a fairy-tale knight. different tunics (Of various colours and cloth that his mother had collected over the years.) , leather scraps fashioned into boots and gloves and occasionally a homemade cloak for traveling. Upon their travels, they discovered an old ring within a dusty box. They brought it home, cleaned it up and began wearing it like a circlet. Believing it to be the circlet of some ancient royalty.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         No

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No

Fae would look at the letter, her eyes sparkling with wonder as she grabbed a quill and some parchment and began penning a reply.
Dear Lord Raziel,
I have come across your missive and I am very pleased to see such a kind and educational offer such as yours.
I have been fascinated with the arcane arts ever since I was a small child and being able to learn a skill within the craft as well as delving into the history and culture of Celianor, is something I just cannot pass up.
I wish to learn the arcane arts so I can unravel the mysteries of magic, to be able to protect those I love and hopefully help bring peace to those in distress.

I wish to thank you for your time and courteous offer.

Kind Regards,
Faerie Adiler

Here is a link to a Screen shot of the book. 

MC Name:

         Zanael

Character's Name:

         Faerie Adiler

Character's Age:

         18

Character's Race:

         High Elf

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         House-Magery

Teacher's MC Name:

         N/A From a Self teach book

Teacher's RP Name:

         N/A From a Self teach book

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

14 minutes ago, Laeonathan said:

Because as someone who lead the Kha with others for a while I can tell you the Furries will return the lore to their fetishes. They don't care about the cool story of the Kharajyr people, their dead godess, their struggles. They'll turn strong ass hunter-tigrasi into cute catboys.

 

That's why.

The thing is, this sort of stuff has been done with elves and humans before from what I've heard. but you don't see all the human players being put under the same box. If you hate furries then that's fair but don't just put prejudice on all of them when a group break the rules or make things weird.

1 minute ago, Aaunic Roleplayer said:

because furries comprise about 100% of the issue we have with ERP in the server, which is against the rules.

that's fair enough but you do know there are furries that aren't like that who just want a unique creature

character to play as? It seems to be more an issue of needing to punish the people who are breaking the rules themselves rather than punishing the collective because they like humanoid animals.

3 minutes ago, Laeonathan said:

Oh Lord no, this will just be a meme like Kha. 90 % of players will be furries.

And why is that an issue?

It's a fantasy world to me I don't see why fantasy races can't be added. it get's boring if you get limited to what you can be if you'd rather not play a human, elf, etc. See where lore writing takes you!

I don't see the issue for there being other creature races other than a cat and a mouse. you could have Lizard folk like in D&D for example. the whole immediate ew no furry race thing is surprising to me.

MC Name:

         Zanael

Character's Name:

         Sieglinde Barclay

Character's Age:

         14

Character's Race:

         Highlander

What magic(s) will you be learning?

         House-Magery

Teacher's MC Name:

         N/A From a Self teach book

Teacher's RP Name:

         N/A From a Self teach book

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         N/A

Do you agree to keep Story updated on the status of your magic app?:

         Yes

Are you aware that if this magic is shelved, it will be unavailable to use?

         Yes

MC Name:

         Za'nael

Character's Name:

         Ze'nari Moonstrider

Character's Age:

         23

Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

         human

Transformed form:

         Kha

Creator's MC Name:

         Zanael

Creator's RP Name:

         Ze'nari Moonstrider

Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

After living with her mother, brother and adoptive human father, Ze'nari took an interest in magic through the books she read, learning about witches, the potions they brew and the spells they cast. Driven by the desire to learn magic she set off on her quest for arcane knowledge.

If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

They are a tan brown furred feline. She has dark brown stripes and white highlights. Green eyes and blue hair. She wears a cowl tied around her shoulders and a fancy looking leather outfit.

Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

         Not at the moment

Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

         yes

Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

         Yes

Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

         I understand

Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

         No