Groobs03

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-Role-Playing definition is not sufficient. -Meta-gaming and Power-Gaming definitions are wrong. -You should use this opportunity to add more lore to your bio. -Act as if your role-playing scenarios are taking place on the server. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 10 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are incorrect. -Your role-playing definition is either incorrect and not very well described. -Your bio could be lengthened out and try not to power-game. -Try to lengthen out your second role-playing scenario. -Your link to your screenshot is broken. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 10 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-You did not define role playing. -You did not define meta-gaming and power-gaming definition is a bit off. -In your bio speak of your character's past, and add much more detail. -Detail your role playing scenarios quite a bit more. -Use imgur to embed your skin or link it. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 10 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-I enjoyed your app but there are a few inconsistencies in your bio. -Try to use lands that are already created or have been created so that you can better relate your character to the server. -There was something that happened about 10 years ago that affected everyone living in Aegis. You should find a way to implement that into your bio. (Hint: If you look in the wiki you'll sea what I mean.) -In your first role play scenario remember that before attacking on this server you must rp it. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 6 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-You did not define Role Playing in your own words, just told your past experiences. -Your power-gaming definition seemed correct, just realize that you will probably never meet anyone by the name Noober in your journeys through Asulon and you are never to call anyone a noob in rp, noob is not a word.(<--- This does not count against you) -I believe mini-maps are allowed but the rest of your meta-gaming definition is correct. (<---This does not count against you) -Try to lengthen your bio out, (Throw in some past experiences, make him real to you.) -In your first role play scenario with the bandits and the elf, try not to power-game so much, act as if you were on the server. -In your second role play scenario you would not be able to do these sorts of things until you filled out a villain app and even then it would need a bit more role play before you burned the place down. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 48 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Power-gaming definition is a bit off. -Lengthen your bio out. -In the second scenario where did it say they were humans. Also try to put a bit more description into it. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 10 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Please learn the meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions. -Nobody lives in Aegis anymore -Flesh out your bio much much more. -Flesh your role play questions out. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 48 hours before posting another app. Have a nice day/night :)

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-I completely love your app and think it was greatly thought out, but I am finding a problem throughout your app. -It seems like your character is completely invincible, like he can escape anything and kill everyone, which fits the definition of power-gaming. -If you were to fix this I am confident that you will be accepted in your next app. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 48 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Your power-gaming definition is a bit off. -I am not so sure you understand the age rate of elves compared to humans and how overprotected they are as children. -Your first scenario is not very rp oriented, it just shows your actions, try to get some actual rp in before you kill the bandits. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Wandering soul help" For above problem. Please wait 2 hours before posting another application. You have 4 more trials. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Your power-gaming definition is a bit too vague, I am not sure you fully grasp the concept. -Try to add more grammar/spelling corrections to your application. -Put paragraphs in your history, and try to add more to it. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team chat" For above problem. Please wait 48 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Your power-gaming definition doesn't fully show you understand the meaning of power-gaming. -What delayed him for 10 years to begin his path in becoming a smith? -Try to show more emotion in your bio, how is your character reacting to all of this? ~A side note: Try to find a more original skin or make one, I have seen that skin many times. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain Please wait 48 hours before posting another application. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Your powergaming definition was copied word for word from Tharon and your metagaming definition was strikingly similar. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/37544-my-lord-of-the-craft-application-form/page__p__257732__hl__concent__fromsearch__1#entry257732

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