Groobs03

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-Your Power-gaming definition isn't exactly what we are looking for, try searching for it on the forums. -From your last app If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go. Have a nice day/night :)

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-First off, you did a great job on your app and I really hope you try again. -One problem I am seeing with your bio is that the undead are already gone. If you wish to know why look through the wiki and you should be able to find it. -There is also a need for more lore in your bio, try to add some actual places in Aegis (Since that seems to be where your bio is at the moment) then tell where he moved to when he went to Asulon. From your last app -Other than that I think you will really be a helping hand in the community and I hope you try to fill out another application. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go. Have a nice day/night :) *Had to edit the post to change the color, the contrast was killing me*

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-Your bio does not include much lore, try to look into the server a bit more. -This is the first I hear of your characters love for animals If it is true then it should be added into your bio. -For your first open response I think it is a bit power gamed that your 14 year old elf is able to scare two bandits off with only her bow. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go. Have a nice day/night :)

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-As stated in your second app your application is in third person, then second person. It would be preferred if it was in third or first. -Your bio gives your character absolutely no back story, it only shows a situation your character was in. -Many grammatical mistakes, although I was able to get through it, just try to patch it up for your next app. -Try to expand on your first open response, use these to act as if you are role-playing on the server. -Realize that your next app is your final chance for three months, so I suggest taking quite a bit of time to look over and fix your app. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. Have a nice day/night :)

*Aleier Sits behind the counter at the wolverine inn baking bread as he hears two men arguing over this concept. He then goes deep into thought, how did Asulon come to be, or the entire land in itself, if it was not a god to create it what did? If it so happens that the world is flat, then how large could it be, how did we travel from Aegis if this so called "Fog" is now holding us in. The customers now looking at Aleier begin to snicker as Aleier smells something.* Damn it! I burned me bread again. *Tries to figure out what he was thinking about but can't. Mumbles to himself, "must not have been that important." *

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Welcome to Asulon! Please be patient while a moderator promotes you in game. nooo, I was just kidding

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Me and a friend of mine made this video on meta-gaming and power-gaming not too long ago.

I enjoyed your app but I ran into this recurring problem in your open ended responses. Your character is completely indestructible and unstoppable. Although I understand trying to fit the stereotype of orcs, you also have to realize that you can be injured, you are not immortal. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go. Have a nice day/night :)

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-Roleplaying definition is wrong. -Metagaming and powergaming definitions are wrong. -Work more on your bio, add a background story, why does he want to mine? etc. -Add more rp to the open ended responses. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. I suggest you take a few hours to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go. Have a nice day/night :)

Replies "Aye, indeed it is"

The note reads "If you think that you are willing to put your combat skills to the max and make money for your fighting! Come and give it a shot!" Contact Aleier Groobs, Brittlerock, or Faroth if ye are intrested. (By posting below) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ (If you decided to contact and you are within high rank of Hanseti you receive a letter back) " This be a promotion for te Wolverines and do not worry about it " ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ (If you are anyone else, this is what you will receive back) "So you wish to try and give it yer all, we will see if ye have what it takes. Come to the maw and say the code words "It is very warm out" or get in contact wit us (Through the forums or through pm) and we will get ye into te bracket. Entry will cost 250 minas but if you win you will get half of the money that we earn from the event. If you wish to watch on one of the scheduled dates speak the code word and slip 50 minas into the passport box, then you will be allowed right into the arena. There will be 16 contestants in the tournament and below is a sketch of what the competition looks like so far. The rules go as follows, 1. This is a 1 on 1 fight, nobody else is to jump in, or you will be disqualified. 2. Do not speak of the tournament as you will be thought of as crazy and not be acknowledged. 3. There are no constrictions on the weapons and armor you wish to use. The dates for fights will come as the contestants begin to fill the bracket. This will all be held at te Maw."

((MC name)): Groobs03 Name: Aleier Groobs Clan (If you have one): The Wolverines Subrace: Cave Dwarf Job: Commander of Te Wolverines Current Residence: The Maw in Hanseti

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-You copied your role-playing definition from here therefore I will not review your app further. -If you have copied anything else I suggest you change it before your next app. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go. Have a nice day/night :)

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-The math doesn't add up, your character left while he was 24 and is now 52. Asulon is 19 to my knowledge. -A tip would be to add more lore to the first part of your bio, instead of random places, tell actual places in history. I will keep this as a tip knowing that it will be much harder with the complete reboot of the wiki. -Your first role-playing scenario shows power gaming, you must give the bandits a chance to respond. If you are still unsure of why you were denied, send me a pm and I Will gladly explain. If I am not on, go to the teamspeak channel "Application Team Help Channel" For above problem. I suggest you take an hour to fix up the things I have said above, then go ahead and give it another go. Have a nice day/night :)