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Accepted.

Welcome to Aegis.

Denied

Possible Reasons that you were Denied

• Wrong Format
  
• Bad Grammar
  
• Doesn't fit into the Lore
  
• Hard to Read
  
• Don't have a Picture of your Skin
  
• To little information
  
• Biography is to short
  
• Clearly haven't read the Lore
  
• Other
  

Denied

Possible Reasons that you were Denied

• Wrong Format
  
• Bad Grammar
  
• Doesn't fit into the Lore
  
• Hard to Read
  
• Don't have a Picture of your Skin
  
• To little information
  
• Biography is to short
  
• Clearly haven't read the Lore
  
• Other
  

Denied

Possible Reasons that you were Denied

• Wrong Format
  
• Bad Grammar
  
• Doesn't fit into the Lore
  
• Hard to Read
  
• To little information
  
• Biography is to short
  
• Clearly haven't read the Lore
  
• Other
  

Denied

Possible Reasons that you were Denied

• Wrong Format
  
• Bad Grammar
  
• Doesn't fit into the Lore
  
• Hard to Read
  
• To little information
  
• Biography is to short
  
• Clearly haven't read the Lore
  
• Other
  

Denied

Possible Reasons that you were Denied

• Wrong Format
  
• Doesn't fit into the Lore.
  
• Hard to Read
  
• To little information.
  
• Biography is to short.
  
• Clearly haven't read anything
  
• Other.
  

Accepted

Denied

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Beef up your Bio. It does not have to be long. I like when the Bios are information and lore filled but short.

Also, fix the Formatting. It shouldn't be all bold. Hard for me to read.

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Fix the Bio. There is no Silverpeak Mountain in Aegis.

You are required to have a Screenshot.

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It was a bit hard to read, it wasn't structured as good as it should and would be. Focus on the Spelling, Capitalization, and Grammar.

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Your Biography is to small, beef it up. Use lore from AEGIS. We are not in the 2000s, we are in the 1300s currently. Using Aegis Times and such or don't use them at all. It will help your application greatly.

Question: If I already have Gold VIP, can I get Diamond if I win this?

Indeed, Donations stack together.

Denied.

For Flyhacking.

Welcome Back.

Can I be a giant pony eating people and shooting lasers out of my eyes? That sums up my character. :3

It would be best if you bought some from one and the rest from another. A lot less time.

Well if no one is willing to roleplay it as we escape aegis with what we can carry.. hrm.. much to be decided

many valid points have been made past few days

Perhaps a we can create big ship, we can't take our inventories, although we can buy a chest for a large sum of money, that can be taken over. It won't be cheap.

When you escape something, you take nothing because you have no time. Perhaps this ship was built in case of something like this happening. We travel across the ocean to a different land that isn't destroyed.

+1