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TRAY

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  1. Please expand your definitions a bit, with some examples. Your bio needs to include server Lore, and details about your character. Your ORQ's need to be longer, and more detailed. Please go through your app, and fix your grammar, and spelling errors. Please re-apply in 24 hours.
  2. Your characters condition is a bit odd, I'm almost positive that it doesn't fit within our Lore. You would need a VA for un controllable actions like this. I would suggest changing your Meta-Gaming, and Power-Gaming definitions to something of your own words, for they are basically copy, and pasted. Please re-apply in 24 hours.
  3. Please note that if you were to get struck by lightning you would not survive. Let's try, and keep everything realistic. This Greek God Of Lightning doesn't fit within our server Lore. Your ORQ's could use a little work, please expand them a bit more with some details. Please re-apply in 24 hours.
  4. You did not wait 24 hours before re-applying. Please wait 24 hours, before re-applying.
  5. A great Application, but you are missing an answer for one of your ORQ's Please fix this, and re-apply.
  6. A nice Application, but.. You need to add an actual screenshot, from & back of your skin. Also some of your ORQ's need a little work. Please fix these, and re-apply in 2 hours.
  7. Real nice application. Please be patient for a GM will Implement you soon. Good Luck, and Safe Travels.
  8. This app seems very fishy, randompeople604 has been inactive since October. I would suggest not reviewing this application, until a GM looks this over.
  9. Your Meta-Gaming definition is incorrect. Your biography needs to include some server Lore, and details about your character. Your ORQ's show signs of Power-Gaming for you wouldn't be able to simply cut the head off of a well trained warrior. You may not kill or commit any other villainous acts when first joining the server, for you would need a VA. Your ORQ's need to be longer, and more detailed. Please re-apply in 24 hours.
  10. Please be patient for a GM will Implement you soon. Good Luck, and Safe Travels.
  11. You may not know magic when first joining the server, you must apply for it after being whitelisted. That is all I can really say. Please re-apply in 24 hours.
  12. To me your character seems a bit Evil, which would not be allowed when first joining the server. Your biography needs to be more detailed, with server Lore in it. Please re-apply in 24 hours.
  13. Moved to Denied Forum
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