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Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. There are many spelling mistakes and typos. It isn't neat and is hard to read. Make the questions bold and answers normal. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Not a bad try, but: Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. There are a lot of spelling mistakes / typos. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Can you make the about you, about you and not your character.. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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Use this link: http://www.lordofthe...od-application/ Copy the questions into an editor. Write your answers and then repost it. Make it neat, well thought and and written. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Before you start have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Please use the format as provided here: http://www.lordofthe...od-application/ Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Your definition for role playing is not what we are looking for. Try to explain it again.. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short. Character biography is far too short. There are some errors. Re-read your application, look at some examples ((but don't copy them)) Read Petyr's excellent guide (linked in this post) and try again. Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short. Character biography is far too short. There are some errors. Make your application neater and easier to read. Re-read your application, look at some examples ((but don't copy them)) Read Petyr's excellent guide (linked in this post) and try again. Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short. Character biography is far too short. There are some errors. Re-read your application, look at some examples ((but don't copy them)) Read Petyr's excellent guide (linked in this post) and try again. Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short. Character biography is far too short. There are some errors. Re-read your application, look at some examples ((but don't copy them)) Read Petyr's excellent guide (linked in this post) and try again. Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

A good attempt, but: Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. There are errors in grammar and punctuation. It is not neat / is ALL BOLD. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Please explain what role play is... you have not given me any indication that you understand what it is. Please don't swear/ use curse-words. There are errors in grammar and punctuation. It is not neat / is ALL BOLD. Your skin link doesn't work. Please past the image into your post. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Did you play WoW on an RP server. Your description of what role play is makes me think you don't know / understand what it is. Please explain what role playing is... There are errors in grammar and punctuation. It is not neat / is ALL BOLD. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. There are errors in grammar and punctuation. It is not neat / is ALL BOLD. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. In fact you didn't write any character biography. There are errors in grammar and punctuation. It is not neat / is ALL BOLD. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. There are errors in grammar and punctuation. It is not neat / is ALL BOLD. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Your answers are too short in places. Your Character Biography is far too short. Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again. Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/ Common reasons people are denied: -It has bad grammar or Punctuation. -Your biography was too short. -Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis. -You obviously didn't read the lore. -Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read. -It lacked effort. -Your skin isn't RP. -Needed an actual picture of your skin. -You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work. -Your application was too short. These are just some of the reasons it could have been I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application. http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

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