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Lirinya

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  1. 5MZ2sMiyQzvNURjPT9oMO4duxChQ_E6bvDHLlwqkh5Eye6Rw-baCQWkn0QQIPMfIWnHB10c1HdhSrbk8DZIpHq0rYzuvrRsEZKCEUuWV0Yb8Ds_vxzSnBkxarF_r60lXYiKbmPhO

     

    • You are welcome to join the [New Player Discord] if you have not already. It gives you access to the CT members, and nation stewards, as well as other new players, and even event posts from time to time.

    • Make sure you read the [New Player Guide] - it should answer most of your initial burning questions.

    • The forums and the [Wiki] are your best friend when it comes to lore, but do not be afraid to ask for help if you need something clarified.

      • Anyone with a bright pink [CT] tag is ready to help.

      • You can join the help channel by using #h

    • Finally, feel free to PM me on Discord at Laurelin#0797

    • Remember the rules!

    And importantly, have fun.

  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    • Your powergaming definition looks as though it has been cut off. Please fix this up.
    • Your biography should contain two references to server lore.
      • Did you know that, to be born in Laurelin, the character would need to be around 350 years old?
        • We are currently on the realm of [Arcas], but at 35, your character would be born on [Atlas]
        • This is the [Dark Elf] wiki page
      • Please, sieve through some pages of the wiki, and pull out some relevent lore!

    Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

    And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  3. 5MZ2sMiyQzvNURjPT9oMO4duxChQ_E6bvDHLlwqkh5Eye6Rw-baCQWkn0QQIPMfIWnHB10c1HdhSrbk8DZIpHq0rYzuvrRsEZKCEUuWV0Yb8Ds_vxzSnBkxarF_r60lXYiKbmPhO

     

    • You are welcome to join the [New Player Discord] if you have not already. It gives you access to the CT members, and nation stewards, as well as other new players, and even event posts from time to time.

    • Make sure you read the [New Player Guide] - it should answer most of your initial burning questions.

    • The forums and the [Wiki] are your best friend when it comes to lore, but do not be afraid to ask for help if you need something clarified.

      • Anyone with a bright pink [CT] tag is ready to help.

      • You can join the help channel by using #h

    • Finally, feel free to PM me on Discord at Laurelin#0797

    • Remember the rules!

    And importantly, have fun.

  4. Changed Status to Under Review

    AfMFL9tgi6GaMHzg8a3FzFBjm5RZdoZOV54k6G9mflRjs7tFxHMbtw5ns6_8g7KH7ZIGyAa5vqagD6JZrREcXTx2eKiN0npxX9H6-KlDsM0NajhNDRymcYXO6znu_z9uaR6BEdS5

    • Your application looks incomplete.
      • karakter adın | Character name implies to me that you were meant to fill in certain parts of this backstory and failed to do so.
        • Please, finish it up. It should be a paragraph or so long; a good 6 or 7 sentences.
    • Second names, hilst not mandatory, are usually suggested. Practically everyone, especially humans, have one.

    Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

    And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  5. AfMFL9tgi6GaMHzg8a3FzFBjm5RZdoZOV54k6G9m

    • Using Berr’lin twice doesn’t count as two references- you still need another!
    • Your powergaming definition, still while not wrong, isn’t what we’re looking for you to understand,
      • Check out power-emoting!
  6. AfMFL9tgi6GaMHzg8a3FzFBjm5RZdoZOV54k6G9mflRjs7tFxHMbtw5ns6_8g7KH7ZIGyAa5vqagD6JZrREcXTx2eKiN0npxX9H6-KlDsM0NajhNDRymcYXO6znu_z9uaR6BEdS5

    • Both of your definitions need work and research- this is a strict RP server, and these two definitions encompass the whole thing.
      • Please research up further on metagaming, powergaming and power emoting.
    • Your biography needs to be a little longer, and it also needs to include two references to server lore at the very least.
      • The High Elf page is [Here]
      • This is the previous map- the world in which your character would have been born. [Atlas]
      • This is the current map, the land on which we now live. [Arcas]
    • Surnames, whilst not mandatory, are encouraged.
    • Your neutral fact is, while still neutral, is not a trait. But- I won’t leave this as a mandatory change- just an encouraged one.

    Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

    And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  7. AfMFL9tgi6GaMHzg8a3FzFBjm5RZdoZOV54k6G9mflRjs7tFxHMbtw5ns6_8g7KH7ZIGyAa5vqagD6JZrREcXTx2eKiN0npxX9H6-KlDsM0NajhNDRymcYXO6znu_z9uaR6BEdS5


    Your app is almost good to go. Infact, it looks fantastic. There is just one minor thing I wish to point out.

    • Your timeline is a little off. Adria currently exists in this current world, in Arcas. For birth places, and places over around fifteen years old, you want to look at [Atlas] for lore references.

    Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

    And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

  8. 5MZ2sMiyQzvNURjPT9oMO4duxChQ_E6bvDHLlwqkh5Eye6Rw-baCQWkn0QQIPMfIWnHB10c1HdhSrbk8DZIpHq0rYzuvrRsEZKCEUuWV0Yb8Ds_vxzSnBkxarF_r60lXYiKbmPhO

    You’ve been quick to edit up your app with the changes, and it’s now at a pretty good point to start on.

    • As a side note, remember that you can’t force anyone to do anything for you. You can be persuasive, but your character can not actually convince anyone to do anything.
    • You are welcome to join the [New Player Discord] if you have not already. It gives you access to the CT members, and nation stewards, as well as other new players, and even event posts from time to time.

    • Make sure you read the [New Player Guide] - it should answer most of your initial burning questions.

    • The forums and the [Wiki] are your best friend when it comes to lore, but do not be afraid to ask for help if you need something clarified.

      • Anyone with a bright pink [CT] tag is ready to help.

      • You can join the help channel by using #h

    • Finally, feel free to PM me on Discord at Laurelin#0797

    • Remember the rules!

    And importantly, have fun.

  9. Once again, we’re not getting this definition.

    • I also suggest looking up power emoting.

    Please, take a minute to look this up, Give it a google, and see what you come up with. It is quite literally, the key rule in lotc.

     

    • Your powergaming definition has, somehow, entirely strayed. Please- take some time to read up on it.
    • As a little note, your description says brown eyes, but the skin has blue eyes.
  10. Changed Status to Under Review

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    I’m denying this outright for the following reasons:

    • No effort seems to have been made to read about the server, or at the very least, the guidelines for the application above.
    • Your powergaming definition needs a little bit more elaboration.
    • Please, if you are truly interested in the server, read about it before you post an application.
      • You need to include two references to server lore in your biography, and it should be several sentences/a few paragraphs long.
    • You can not know magic before you start playing the server.
    • Your description should describe what a player would see, should they first meet the character,
    • You need a suitable skin. Something representative of your character- not a generic hooded figure with seemingly glowing eyes.

     

    You are free to reapply in 24 hours – take some time to properly read up on the server and its lore.

    Here are some links that might be of use to you.

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