Lirinya

• You character biography should contain two pieces of server lore.
  • At such an age, your character would have seen so much of the world. You have so much lore at your disposal.
• I also suggest spell checking. Whilst not worth denial over, just take a moment to re-read whta you write.
• Surnames, whilst not mandatory, are suggested.
• Please elaborate on your description.
  • What does he wear? His height and eye colour, and so on.
• Your interesting facts should be based on character traits.
  • Having a stammer, for example, might be considered a quirk or trait.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

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• Technically, with both Norlander and highlander stated, you’ve included two lore references. However, at 23 years old, your character has seen so much more. Please include at least another lore reference- this could be an event, or a place or something.
• Please elaborate on your metagaming definition.
• Your powergaming definition is not what we are looking for. I suggest looking up power emoting, too.
• Second names, while not mandatory, are usually existant.
• ‘Smaller than average human’ isn’t viable, in my eyes, as part of the definition. The human wiki page specifies heights and appearences, so please elaborate on this in general.
• Your interesting facts should be trait based.
  • Weak, for example, can be a trait.
• There should be a positive, neutral and a negative.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

This player does have permission to apply as Amador. 

• You were about right with your metagaming definition, but your example isn’t entirely accurate.
• In your bio biography you mention Kaedrin. Kaedrin is an old name and an old place, and from what I can gather, doesn’t currently exist.
  • It might be viable for the characters father to be of Kaedrin decent, but this character is far too young.
  • You also need to include another reference to lore. Druids, since they are generic to fantasy, don’t really count.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Hi there! 

I'm going to deny this app for the following reasons:

The concept of the server, and character building seems to have been lost along the way. Your goal here is to create a character with a back story that you can roleplay as on the server, not create a quest giving npc. 

You also seem to have put no effort in reading up on the application guidelines above, or looking up the definitions of metagaming/powergaming, or server lore. 

Here's a list of what you need to change. 

• You need to research powergaming and metagaming, and you need to show that you know what these mean. 
• Ideally, your character biography needs to be at least 7 sentences long and it needs to include at least two references of sever lore that aren't just dumped at the end of a sentence. 
• Your character needs a name. 
• Your description should describe what a person sees at a glance. 
• You can not know any magic/have any magical powers /be mystical nor can you be a supplier of any item a person needs. 

Feel free to make these changes, and reapply. 

• Both your metagaming and powergaming definitions need work. I also suggest looking up power-emoting.
• Your biography needs elaborating- try to make it at least 7 sentences.
  • You also need to try and watch your grammar. Capitals at the beginning of sentences, and so on.
  • You need at least two pieces of lore that aren’t just dropped at the end of the sentence.
• Try and write your description as a sentence or two.
• Your interesting facts should display a positive, neutral and negative.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Denied based on inactivity. Feel free to make the changes above, and reapply.

Denied based on inactivity. Feel free to re apply after making the above changes.

• Your metagaming definition is almost there. It just needs a little rewording.
• I’m unsure of what you mean when it comes to “magical archery”, as there is no such thing, from my knowledge.
  • Remember, you can not know anything magic related at the beginning.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw