Daniel_J

Accepted Just remember you need a villain app to kill people so please don't go around killing people who are "evil" unless they attack you first, welcome to the server. :mrgreen:

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Denied Notes: Main reason I denied you was because your bio does not follow lore, we are all born in Asulon or Aegis if your born before the fall. Secondly you did not explain power gaming well enough the first part "Powergaming is using power or force without giving the other player(s) a fair chance." is good but the second "For example running up to somebody and killing/hitting them without warning for n o apparent reason." this is more bad RP a good example of power gameing is this " Arcturus sees his opportunity and hits the bandit in the low in the stomach, killing him." one can not simply give a low blow to kill someone. I know that I'm grading this hard but personaly I can't stand peopel who power game. please remember not to post until 48 hours after being denied.

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Denied, Notes: you have a good application just give a little bit more back story to your bio and make sure you link works PM me when you do this and I will take a look at your application. Please do not repost until 48 hours after being denied

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Denied Notes: I think your app is great you just need a better bio sence it only one run-on sentence. other then that you understand what roll play is and what meta gameing is all you got to do is right out a good bio. Please do not repost until 48 hours after being denied.

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Denied Notes: your bio needs to be longer and more detailed, your application it messy and hard to read and you need to give an actual link for your screen shop. If you want help feel free to private message and I would love to help. please remember not to repost until 48 hours after your denied.

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Denied Notes: you need more detail in your bio it is to short and doesn't explain any back story to any of the people in it. The question about the two bandits you replied "Pulls out his bow shouts for the bandits to stop if they don't I will give them an arrow to the kneee." please uderstand we take RP very seriously here and that if you are hear to goof around you have the wrong server. Over all you rushed this everything in the RP part of you app needs more detail. if you would like help you can private message me and I would love to help as much as possible please remember not to repost untill 48 after being denied.

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Denied Notes: Your bio is a bit confusing and hard to follow, you also show signs of powergameing in you bio and you seem to poor grammer skills. On top of that you do not have a skin link. I feel that you just did not take your time with the application. If you would like help you can private message me and I would love to help. please remmber you may not repost untill 48 hours after being denied

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Denied, Notes: you had a great applicion it really was the only reason I denied it was becuase your bio dose not fit with the lore. you have to understand that if every one could just say they where the son or daughters of someone we would all be kings and queens. other then your bio every thing was great I would say make a different family history and you would be fine. if you would like any help you may PM on the forms I would love to help please remmber do not repost until 48 hours after being denied

*You walk up to the notice board of Solace the capital of Salvus you began reading* “Looking for farmers to work to the Kingdom farms. Must have experience planting and harvesting wheat, pumpkin, melon, and sugar cane. Please note that there are very few spots that still need to be filled. We are looking only for the best.” *signed Daniel Amici* *you are interested in the job so you go to his office and you find a piece of paper on his door frame that reads* All farmers that will be working for Salvus will be hired though me, Daniel Amici. All farmers will be paid based on the amount of work they put in to the farm over a period of time ((number of wheat collected)) . They will also be required to replant all seeds they acquire during harvest and may not leave ((IC or not)) the farm until all the seeds are replanted and after that they must place all there wheat they collected. As farming is one of the biggest factors to Salvus’s economy we will be treating it with high regard, and anyone abusing there abilities to farm on Salvus’s land will be punished as just. Actions that can lead to punishment Stealing seed or wheat from the farms acting unjust toward other farmers or residence of Salvus using or selling wheat for there own benefit

I nominate Edward_Talbot/William_Talbot

I am looking forward to getting to leave in such a great nation :)

* Daniel is sleeping in his bed wondering why no one here is doing the same.

Hey I was just accepted kinda to the TUAC do you have anouther thread that has news or some thing where I can see what is going on? thanks