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Please accept the rules;

If it is possible, could you expand your definition of RP/PG/MG, the one sentence answers are very vivid and doesn't give me an indication if you understand them.

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she was captured and taken back to mordor

Taking this part of your biography, no city we have is named 'Mordor' I believe you're taking this from LordofTheRings. Please try to refer to another city / history / time upon our server to put into your biography. You can find that here: http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

Please expand your definition on powergaming/metagaming/roleplaying (PG/MG/RP). What you currently have doesn't give me an indication you understand this. 

You have 24 hours to make this change, PM me if you finish early.

First;

Please agree to the rules.

Second, expand more on your definitions on RP / PG / MG (Roleplay, powergame, metagame).

Third, please expand your biography to be a few more sentences to give us more of a backstory of your character, also try to include a piece of the server lore/history/city that fits in with your backstory. You can find that here:

http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

You have 24 hours to fix these changes.

Denied.

Reapply in 6 hours.

Accepted

Accepted

The first thing I want to bring up, you clicked no to not agreeing to the rules.

Secondary; your definitions for powergaming / metagaming although the example you used is good, are incorrect in some aspects. If possible could you write out in three sentences what each are, you have the roleplaying one already set, just the metagaming and powergaming one please.

Third, your biography, sadly we do not have these 'washed up characters' with no backstory whatsoever. I can offer you some inspiration however, your backstory can be a pirate crews slave, served to row the boat until your last voyage, when the boat engaged into combat you managed to escape but not without injury as the mast of the ship collapsed near you causing a wave of water to submerge you down... taking in much of the salt water it caused you to black out and have memory issues as you awake on the isle of Atlas. 

Don't take this word for word however, make it your own or try a completely different rout. 

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Fourth, your skin is. Not acceptable on the server. If you wish you can take a look here: 

and find a wonderful skin to use. Otherwise try to find a more roleplay friendly skin.

You have 24 hours to fix your application, goodluck. PM when finished. 

You need to expand your power-gaming / meta-gaming / roleplay definitions. 

Your biography is written in the first person, although this isn't against the rules you need to include a piece of server lore / history / cities. Also try to expand your character through it.

Your character description needs to be broadened also, you cannot say 'A creepy person'.

You have 24 hours to fix your application, message me once finished.

Expand your definition for power-gaming, with what you currently enough doesn't give me an understanding if you know what it is or not.

Also your biography, if you can include a piece of server history/lore/city name and incorporate it somewhere in, that'll be good.

http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

You have 24 hours to fix these changes on your application. Message me when done.

Accepted

Accepted

Please expand on your definition of meta-gaming / power-gaming.

Your biography also needs to describe the histories of your character and a piece of server lore.

http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

You have 24 hours to fix these changes, PM me when you're finished.

Please resubmit an application in a more serious manner if you wish to join the server.

Accepted.

Please expand your definition on metagaming/powergaming.

You have 24 hours to fix these issues, PM me when you have completed them.

Accepted.

Accepted.

Accepted

Accepted

Accepted

Accepted

Accepted.

Your character cannot learn magic until you've been accepted upon the server for a period of one week. I suggest removing this and giving her an ambition to learn magic instead, also if you can refer to a piece of server lore in your backstory it'll be great. Thank you!

http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

You can find dates/times/server history here.

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