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Pliz

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  1. Denied.

    Your definition of Power-Gaming is wrong. Look for the RP definition, not the RPG one.

    How you handle the bandit question is odd. When you're pointing your sword to the man on the ground, what is the other bandit doing...? Wouldn't he kill you at that moment?

    Your skin link doesn't work, try embedding it into the post.

  2. Hm... Accepted.

    Things to look out for:

    • You MUST get a villain application before RP'ing anymore kills. NO ASSASSINATIONS until you have an accepted VA. Got it?
    • The bandits question has a hint of Power-Gaming... be careful.

  3. Denied.

    It's well written, but I don't understand where your ambitions link to. You want to tell people about Aeriel, yet you never say anything about that in your biography. You also want to link up with your cousin in Asulon, yet you never talk about that in the bio either.

    You also have some odd parts in your bio, like the village with playing children... It didn't seem to have any after-affects on the rest of your bio...

    Please wait 48 hours to re-apply.

  4. Denied.

    This needs SO much more effort.

    Explanation of Meta and Power gaming is incorrect. Search it up!

    "What is Role-Play" needs expanding.

    Biography is too short.

    Open-Ended questions are too short.

    We do not use "L33T" speak, please fix that.

    Please wait 48 hours to re-submit an application.

  5. Denied.

    • Much too short. Put more effort into it.
    • "What is Role-Play" Needs to be expanded, it is not just like real life
    • Meta-Gaming definition is wrong.
    • Power-Gaming definition is wrong, look for the RP definition, not the RPG one.
    • Open-Ended questions need expanding.
    • Your bio is hard to understand.

    Please wait 48 hours to submit a new application, Thank you.

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