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Zeddicus Fyren

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    Dmagoo's 3Rd Application

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    • Your application was denied for these reasons:
    • You copy and pasted the definitions for Meta-Gaming and Power-Gaming.
    • You need to expand your biography, I want to know more about your character and how he became to be.
    • You need some grammar improvements.
    • Please expand on the questions.

    You can apply again in 2 hours, in that time please improve your application. If you have any queries, message me.

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    Goldsox Application

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    Please expand your biography.

    It was good except for the fact you left out some needed information.

    The OOC questions were perfect, but the RP ones weren't.

    In two hours you can re-apply, in this time please improve your application. Message me if you have any queries.

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    Asianninjamonkey's Application Submission #4

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    I enjoyed reading your bio, but you copy and pasted the description of metagaming and powergaming:

    Metagaming is expressing information you obtain out of character and using it to an advantage in character. Powergaming is when you use roleplaying to force an action upon another player, such as player one stabs player two instead of player one attempts to stab player two.† Really it meens for you too have a advantage over another player so you could win a fight, a war, ETC.

    There were also multiple grammar errors, and you need to expand your answers to a few of the questions.

    You can apply again in two hours, until then, improve your application with the advice i have given you, if you still have any queries, please message me, or write on my wall.

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    Firemastah's App

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    You copy and pasted a lot from Wikipedia.

    Here's Wikipedia Defining Role Playing:

    A role-playing game is a game in which the participants assume the roles of characters and collaboratively create stories. Participants determine the actions of their characters based on their characterisation, and the actions succeed or fail according to a formal system of rules and guidelines. Within the rules, they may improvise freely; their choices shape the direction and outcome of the games.

    Role-playing can also be done online in the form of group story creation, involving anywhere from two to several hundred people, utilizing public forums, private message-boards, mailing lists, chat-rooms, and instant-messaging chat clients (e.g. MSN, Yahoo!, ICQ) to build worlds and characters that may last a few hours, or several years. Message boards such as ProBoards and InvisionFree are popularly used for role-playing. Often on forum-based roleplays, rules and standards are set up, such as a minimum word count, character applications and "plotting" boards to increase complexity and depth of story. For some, romance and sex (though more often the former) are key elements to publicly-viewable role-plays, with the majority of such play taking place in chat-rooms or so-called "1×1" (one-on-ones) and very small groups, with other elements taking a back-seat in terms of importance. Typically, for medium and large groups of role-players, and large role-plays, the reverse is true, with romantic sub-plots taking a back-seat to story and setting development and action scenes, yet when it does occur, it is often (and in some cases expected to be) of a far less blatant nature.

    There are different genres of which one can choose while role-playing, including, but not limited to, fantasy, modern, medieval, steam punk, historical, etc. Books, movies or games can be, and often are, used as a basis for role-plays (which in such cases may be deemed "collaborative fan-fiction"), with players either assuming the roles of established canon characters or using those the players themselves create ("Original Characters") to replace—or exist along side—characters from the book, movie or game, playing through well-trodden plots as alternative characters, or expanding upon the setting and story outside of its established canon. Role playing takes years to master, but it does not take too long to learn the basics.

    Here is you defining it:

    A role-playing game is a game in which the participants assume the roles of characters and collaboratively create stories. Participants determine the actions of their characters based on their characterisation, and the actions succeed or fail according to a formal system of rules and guidelines. Within the rules, they may improvise freely; their choices shape the direction and outcome of the games.

    I have marked in green where you copied. At least if you use another Website, write it in your own words.

    Please wait 2 hours before having another attempt, message me if you have any queries.

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