Zeddicus Fyren

Nice application.

Please find a link to your skin, and message it to me.

Thanks.

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Welcome to LOTC.

You did what i told you, improved the grammar. A few mistakes here and there, but not enough to make me change my decision.

I don't understand how your character could be a teenager, as well as being a leader of a town.

Please have a look through, and improve.

Please have another attempt in 2 hours, message me any queries.

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Welcome to LOTC!

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Welcome to LOTC!

You had a few small time errors, like a few spelling mistakes, but not enough for me to change my decision.

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I'm sorry, but i have to deny your application.

Reasons being:

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• You need to get a grip on the Grammar.
  
• You spelling wasn't very good.
  
• You had repeated your character name in the biography multiple times, and I found it hard to keep track of what was going on.
  

Please wait 24 hours before your next application. Message me if you have any queries.

This is not safe. *runs to his farm and grabs his chicken, leaving his family behind.*

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Your application was denied.

You have multiple problems in it.

• Capital letters overused.
  
• Large Spelling problems.
  
• Apostraphies used in wrong places.
  
• Need to expand on RP questions.
  
• Needs going over.
  

Please message me for any queries, and wait 24 hours till your next attempt. In that time please improve.

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You are too young and your grammar is very bad.

Please wait 24 hours before making another attempt. Message me if you have queries.

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Please wait 24 hours 'till your next attempt.

Here is why I denied your application:

• Grammar errors; Spacing, full stops, capital letters.
  
• Lore problems.
  
• Please expand on the RP questions.
  
• Please expand on the OOC questions.
  
• Bio was good, but needs going over
  

Please message me if you have any queries.

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The application started out very good, but there were some problems.

• You copy and pasted a few things.
  
• Grammar errors.
  
• You need to expand on your character's ambitions.
  

Please message me if you need help concerning your application.

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I told you to wait 24 hours.

Wait 24 hours.

I can't decide, I will forward this to Lirinya, as the dyslexia I'm not sure how to choose. Bear with my decision.

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