After some editing, How about this?
Out-Of-Character:
Minecraft Account Name:radical_sinz
Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No, I bought tickets but I couldn't make it.
How old are you?:16
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Standard Time, USA
Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, yes I do.
Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am creative, easy to get along with, and I am really social. I don't quit anything I start.
How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Couple hours a day.
What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Roleplaying is entering a new world as someone else, and living as them.
In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.
Metagaming is using is when you using information you know but your character doesn't know, to influence gameplay. Power gaming is typing in actions that may seem unfair, like saying "chops head off."
What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be fun, and filled with people to meet, and adventures to have.
What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I play on a friend's server, and I have not left it.
Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes
How did you hear about us?: A friend told me about this.
Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? No, but I will
What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: radical_sinz
In-Character:
Character Name: Novakin
What is your Race?: Human
Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): As a young boy, Novakin always went hunting with his father where he developed the skills of hunting and archery. He would collect many kills. When he was 15, his parents were killed by bandits while he was left to die. His location was miles from the nearest city so he had to live off the land. As he was trying and hoping to make his way to the next town, he ran into Vincent, a hunter from a different part of the world. Luckily, Vincent was kind enough to help Novakin in his travels to the city Lunavera.
In Lunavera, Novakin is looking for work from the farms to the shopkeepers. He then runs into the local smithy. The blacksmith offers him a job as an apprentice in smithing. Novakin would use the next 10 years to master his craft as a blacksmith and to secretly train his swordsmanship so that if he may run into the bandits that killed his parents, he can find and take his revenge. Both him and Vincent are best friends
Your characters ambitions: Novakin wants to find revenge for his parents but also make them proud by joining the guard at any city.
Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? : Novakin approaches the bandits and tells them to leave the elf alone. When the bandits refuse, Novakin shows them he is serious by pulling out bow and shooting one in the leg. The bandits attack him and the takes them down with his sword.
Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? Al'khazar has been taken over by the undead… But if this was a real situation, Novakin would say "I would like some food." the owner would give him some food, and Novakin would either do a job for the owner or pay him a nice sum of minds