Dr. Ducky-D

I am setting your application to

There are a couple of things that you will need to change before being accepted.

• Your powergaming definition is not quite right. Remember that you can look these definitions up, just don't forget it must be in your own words.

• Your bio lacks lore ever so slightly and you seem to be in the wrong realm. The server is currently in The Fringe. I suggest you use this information to help you add more lore.

And just a bit of advice: when you do get accepted and begin to play your character you will find Orcs and their subrace don't speak normally. They have their own language, as you can see here. I suggest learning some and getting to know the rest in game.

You have 24 hours to make the appropriate changes to your application so that I may accept you. If you have any questions/concerns/problems or you have finished the editing on your application please message me privately over the forums.

Good luck!

WE MUST WITHSTAND THE STORM!

Do you love me, bby?

Moved to Accepted Forum

I approve

Now go and get out of my hair before you make me cry.

M'boy is all grown up...

Oh and ps...

Make the AT team proud...

I'm setting your application to...

There are just a couple of things I'd like you to fix up real quick for me.

• The lore in your biography is out of date. When looking over the wiki be sure that the details you are going to use are from the current realm the server is on. (That being The Fringe now)

• I'd like to see you add a bit more to your biography as well. You do not really give much of a back story for the character itself. It is good but it lacks events pertaining to the character itself. Just give me a bit more!

Just fix up these two things and you should be golden! You have 24 hours to do so.

If you have any questions/there is any confusion or if you finish up the edits please send me a private message and I will get back to you as quickly as possible.

Good luck!

Edric snarls quietly to himself as he reads the note. He'd speak aloud for anyone nearby to hear, saying:

"Pyromancers are nasty little things, most of them at least! Just want to burn everything, those kinds. No one ever wants to learn Geomancy... noooo because you can't kill people as easily with that a couple rocks."
He'd let out a low huff, managing to settle down.

"Geomancy, now that there is real magic."

The now only somewhat disgruntled man would scribble a quick note on the original paper before shuffling off.

"You should learn Geomancy, it's a beautiful and fine art."

MASS POST

 

Not gonna bother quoting, you should know which one's yours. Waiting on BrandNewKitten's to render as the magic bow and arrow's transparency make it take a long time, but all will be done soon. ^_^

 

EDIT: BrandNewKitten's Render

Woooo! Awesome! I'm really digging it. I like the extra little touch you added too.

You're doing God's work friend, keep it up!

1 Why you deserve a model. (Can be silly) This is a must.

Because you love me and you know it. (Ilu2bbycakz)
 

2. Character size. (Height, if they're fatter, etc) Use -ish statements. (Halfling-ish, Orc-ish) 

He's a High Elf, so tall and skiny-ish, like he could be a basketball star.

 
3. Character pose. (What they're doin' with their booooty body)

I'm going for a whole duck kinda theme here, so if you could help me with that it'd be awesome. If you could have him sitting that'd be great. If he could be sitting in a puddle that'd be even greater, dunno if that's possible. Perhaps have his arms out like he's trying to fly?
 
4. Character skin. (The flat PNG file, not a screenshot)

Pretty good. I can dig it. Glad I stopped to listen. 

+1, and keep up the good work.

(Glowstone Archery)
Archer: Sariant Edric Altraza (duckd8)

Artyom remembers he and his comrades were hurt in the elf city and needed help when the speaker and her friends drew sword and dawned Armour and said Armour or die. Artyom suggests not trusting these people.

Sebatian hobbles through the crowd to Artyom's side, wrapping an arm around him. He recalls the story his comrade told him of from the last elven night, his face contorting with anger and confusion, but mostly confusion.

Edric looks at all the others who registered for the games, frowning slightly before muttering to himself. "No one invited me to be on a team."

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application is being set to...

There are just a few things I'd like you to fix up before I can accept your app.

• Your powergaming definition isn't quite right, you might have found a different variation of the term. Feel free to have a look around the web or perhaps our wiki to find the definition.
• Your bio is a bit short. I'd like it if you added a bit more to it, especially if it were a bit of lore, which you can find on the wiki aswell!

Just a couple fixes and then you should be ready to go!

If you find you need any help please feel free to message myself or any other application members on the forums!

You have 24 hours to make the required edits to your app, once you do that just message me and I'll get right back to you.

Good luck!

Moved to Accepted Forum

I am going to set your application to...

There are just a few tweaks you'll have to make before I can accept your application.

• I'd like you to add just a bit more to your powergaming definition, I think you're just about there but not quite. (You can look up these definitions but you may NOT copy someone else's, make sure you remember that!)
•  Abresi was back in Anthos. I don't exactly know how long it's been but you should be sure to add some sort of transition part to your biography as we're now in the Fringe and Anthos is gone. Here's the page for the Fringe on the wiki. If you need it.
• You should add just a couple more weaknesses and special skills to your character, and remember that they do not have to be combat oriented either.

If you just fix up these few things I think you'd have a pretty swanky application here.

You have 24 hours to do so (plenty of time).

Feel free to message me privately over the forums if you need any help. You should also

message me when your app is done and ready for review.

Good luck!

((This is the kinda stuff we should be doing... seems all in good fun here, me finks))

Despite hearing the laughter on the tip of their tongues, Edric feels inspired by the beautiful and rousing scene. He lets out a single tear before running off, feeling the sudden need to do go with himself.

"Despite every dwarf, orc, snelf and minion of the cockmeister having died thrice over due to the monks whom are too stupid to let the stupid stay dead, they keep on coming back to be a nuisance. They are like oil, very hard to wash off no matter how hard you try!"

 

He shrugs, rubbing his chin for a moment.

 

"maybe a game of whack-a-mole is a more fitting analogy."

A random peasant wanders by, letting out a low grumble at the man. He quickens his pace, expecting the man to start foaming at the mouth soon enough. "Som'one ish eh vereh angreh man. Tis ain' good fer ye' heart!"

Edric looks around, confused for a moment. He does not exactly feel 'purged'. 

(Still was a fun fight, got exciting)

For the elf one have a high elf sipping tea on the walls of Tahn'siol talking about how much better things are now that everything's  segregated, and below the wall give glimpses of dark elves leaping from roof to roof and random trees springing up out of houses for the wood elves.

 

"Our Mali'ame and Mali'ker 'cousins' have such wonderfully unique and quaint ways... and thanks to these walls, those ways are kept very far away from us." *Sips tea*

This, by God it makes sooooo much sense! Now I want to see the Elves go first.

Your application has been set to

There are a few things you need to fix up before I can accept you.

-Your metagaming definition is not quite right, you should be sure to review it and edit it.

-If your powergaming definition could be reworded that would be great, but it doesn't have to be.

-Mage is not a race. You can find the main races HERE with just a bit of searching. (By your screenshot I'd say your character looks like a human.)

-Anthos is not a city, but a realm. I would suggest going to the wiki, HERE and reading up on the lore a bit as you will need some in your biography, the more the better.

You have 24 hours to fix up the outlined problems above! Be sure to message myself

or any other application team member for assistance if you may need any! We don't bite!

Message me or another AT when your application has been edited and needs to be reviewed

Good luck! I hope to hear from you soon.

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Denied, you've edited some pieces of the application but you've missed the biography.

You may re-apply in 24 hours, if you have any questions please send me a PM.

"It's good to see OOC relations are improving between the two warring groups. RP has no where to go but up after seeing this." - Nobody

"Hoes gonna drop" says old man Meldur

A random man hobbles by Meldur, taking in a quick puff of his green before muttering out just loud enough to hear. 

"I like ye', yo'es chill."

I giggled.