-♣- Ƙindled -♣-

A few messenger doves had crossed the whole realm just to deliver rather important letters to each and all noble monarchs of Oren. The letter would have a wax stamp of house Winter, keeping it shut. Once opened it would read..

~o:-:o~

Dearest lords and ladies of the realm,

The patriarchs of the betrothed request of ye

the honour of thine most esteemed presence

and the pleasure of thine most noble company

at the marriage of the Lord Robert Winter II,

and the Lady Elsie Blackwell.

At noontide on the twentieth of The First Seed,

in the woodlands of Fanneh,

in the outskirts of Kaldonia.

~o:-:o~

 

I need to practice criticising so here.

 

 

Constructive criticism, wooo.

 

PS; This isn't some bull I invented because I think it's true. It's pulled from books I've read about writing, my personal writing experience and the criticism I've recieved before in my crit groups.

Don't criticise someone's work, if they don't ask for it.

If you borking die, man.. I'll borking cry myself to sleep every night for many, many nights.. The day a true swede die, is the day a true swede cries. Emenzi, stockholm I ditt hjärta, för kung of fosterland. Gör Svergie stolt, min frände.

Börk Bork Bårk and Børk!

Good to know that someone cares about the new players. I don't want to care about them myself, so it feels good that someone else does it for me. +1

Edge purge.

also iblees in her true form

Yes please.

Why does all exotic dancers have to be feminine in lotc.. Man, I just want some of that real shizzle, you know?

So I had this.. There has to be gender equality 

Iblees is a busty dark elf.

I think I'll keep my personal opinions to myself. Hyll Sveariket.

För kung of fosterland!

Edgi 

I've honestly never heard of you, my friend. Also, first.

Uter grins to himself as well as nodding in approval "Ye' anot'er order o' tha' norf? Tha' year seems tae cold finally lit a spark in our frozen hearts! Keep the norf alive, bretheren!" He thought to himself, drinking from a horn of mead.

What about events? What if there are about five people, all agreeing to rp, besides one? Also same thing with an rp fight, everyone agrees but one, then it should be rp. It should.

k

Robert smiles, as he hears the news. Preparing himself to sing once more.

Peace, Equality, Freedom.

Don't you mean.. 

He is bad at everything he does. 

EDIT:

Besides stuff he does on Lotc

So my plans finally worked out. I got into the 4.0 build team, and now I can finally leak screenshots, here you go guys!

The human plains:

The elven plains:

The orcish waters:

 

So.. If you didn't understand.. This is just a joke, yeah.. Don't take me away from the build team :,c

I've learnt to let my rage out on friends of Malinor and women.

Third

Robert had done nothing peculiar the night before, besides crying at his loss of teeth. It was sad for him, to have his father beat the crap out of him just cause he had mauled his crown-jewels a few days before. What did he need them for anyhow? He was an old man. Nevertheless did Robert follow his father to the wedding ceremony. Robert was dressed in his usual noble coat and fur cape as he entered the halls with his father and lord Blackwell. They talked about women, and who had the nicest bust and the fairest snout, but in the end they just laughed since we all know that there are really no ugly women of noble birth in this realm. As his father grew ever drunker, Robert decided to "grasp" (S@tch is a foul word, it seems.) Harold's "flaskhip" from him, and take a sip of the bitter lager. He began coughing before slipping it back into Harold's pocket.

Jumping down from the bench he sat at, he made his way over to some other children to fight them with a toy sword he had brought with him. His shouting echoed through the halls, and they went along the lines of "Thou hast sinned, vile peasant! Feel the wrath of mine blade; Edgy!" He kicked and played foul at some points, but they all enjoyed it. Specially when Mace arrived. They fought and argued in a friendly way. Mace was Robert's cousin of the same age. 

Moments later his father stood up, pointing at his uncle and newly claimed aunt. Everyone applauded and cheered at the speech he had worded. It filled the room with some aura of happiness at this dire age, perhaps it was finally time for peace, no more wars? Who knows.. but Mog.

Yeah, both parties should really shimmer down and be calm and nice. No need to be angry or mad. Talk it out like adults or something, instead of just throwing semi-agressive wordings at eachother, if you have nothing better to come with than stuff like thatt, I suggest you take a break and cool down.

Anyhow, humans hunt Bengal tigers. Humans didn't natively exist in the Fringe, did they? Also, Jade is right about the "Why are they even close to extinction?" There are - as you have said now - plenty of wolves and plenty of other animals. Which predator would hunt and kill the Serpent dogs? Also, I'm out. I don't want to get in a ****-storm. Just saying that this should be more public to everyone if they're supposed to exist,

you'd have to get two pure blooded ones to make pups and seeing as there are only 4 this means that there will be inbreeding at some point probably.

You do know that you actually inbreed dogs? It's actually not as bad as people thing, of course they can get some errors, it's a common thing. Most domestic dogs are usually inbred, or have inbred parents.

I'm not really a fan of lore that is only applicable to a handful of people, and you have to go through those people to be apart of it. It's sort of like runesmithing, which I dislike, but at least it is available to most Dwarves that have proven themselves. This is clearly only available to you and your friends, which is wrong.

I can honestly say that I dislike this lore. Firstly cause I find it way out of place, and pretty much not fitting to much other lore, how did someone mate a serpent and a greyhound? Nevertheless. There dogs should suffer great problems with their backs, since having to lift up their head all the time, meaning it would make it hard for them to chase after some wolf, or anything in that matter. Also; Posted Today, 12:12 AM

This is not far from powergaming. One of these serpent hounds would hardly be able to take down a pack of wolves, or dogs for that matter. Have you ever seen the patter which a pack of dogs attack in? They go in, snap at the legs, or butt of the opposing foe. Basically taking down strength by each second, until they have little to no stamina left to do anything - that's when the wolves would go for the kill. This is at least how they take down each other in.. let us call it duels. 

Also if they're natives to this land.. Heck, I wouldn't think that wolves were, so how could they've been able to go for wolf hunts? Also, how would someone learn to tame one of these? It's not like man learnt how to tame wolves in a day or two, it took many, many years for them to tame them, and make them loyal.

I'm not too good at talking my mind, so I often don't, but I honestly don't think that this should be a thing.

I'll say that I disagree to this lore, since as Jade said. It feels like this will just be a clique thing. Simply put this just seems unneeded and just out of place, even for the fringe.