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    Good to see you again! So after reading this through I see that there have been changes, which is what I asked for. Shows that you are willing to learn and develop within our community, which is good! You will see that with time it will be a lot of fun to work towards your characters goal with obstacles in the way as it will shape who he is. There are some minor bits and bobs such as grammar but the point gets through and I am confident that you will do well. A GM will implement this application soon and while you wait feel free to hit me up and ask any questions that you might have, or lurk around the forums/wiki!

     

    Senseisirnipples, welcome to lord of the craft and don't forget to have these things above in mind! Happy RPing! :)

  2. You could post an alt application with information containing info of your new account and your old info so that it can be taken off the whitelist! Just leave a notice at the top or bottom saying that the old account has to be removed. 

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    Hello hello! Looks good to me, this application is accepted! A GM will soon implement you so that you will be able to join but while you wait I suggest to either send me a forum message with any questions that you might have to get you started or lurk the forums/wiki!

    Welcome to lord of the craft!

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    Hello there! Giving the application a few reads and thoughts I see that this application needs to be worked on. I will list them below and deny this application for now, there is simply too much that I see has to change. You may reapply in 24 hours with the changes in mind.

    I shall go through each point.

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    • Your bio need to be fixed, it doesn't contain a story that I am looking for or any lore references from the Wikipedia. It's about telling a story and events that interests the person reading it and if you only include sentences such as "He likes to hunt. He likes to eat food." then it isn't a story. You need to change this. I want you to write an original character story and include things such as why he wants to become a person that aims to kill for gold, the motivation behind this? 

     

    • Your characters strengths. He has basically the whole ordeal and you mention he is very good at these things but what's the fun in being the best? I want you to offer me a balanced character, a realistic one that is not master as so many things. Trust me it will be more fun for you and the person you will possibly Role-play with in the future!

     

    • The characters ambitions are fine but I can't see that already having these skills fully developed making any assassination tasks an easy task for him doesn't sound fun to me. Comes back to not making a godly character.

     

    • Your characters weaknesses. They have to be something that is a weakness to begin with. Being ambushed and outnumbered is pretty much a weakness everyone shares. Can't accept these.

     

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    These are the changes that I hope you can fix when you apply the next sometimes after the 24 hour cooldown that you have from now. If you have any questions or concerns you are free to message me through the forum and I will answer them to my best ability!

    Good luck and hope to see these changes! :)

  5. Of coruse! But you would need to use the correct format in order to do so! 

    Check out these links below and send me or any other AT member a forum message if you need help!

    Here are the links!

     

     

     Hope this helps you!

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    Hello there! Looks like you forgot the other part of the application! 

    The whole application format is one collective post so you simply copy the whole thing and fill in the information! I will denying this one and let you apply again in six hours time with the full application.  If you have any questions as I do believe this to be a simple misunderstanding just send me a forum message!

    I show you what it looks like below, just copy the whole post!

     

    Out-Of-Character Information

    Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

     

    What’s your Minecraft account name?:

    How old are you?:

    Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

    Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

    What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

    Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):

    How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:

    Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

     

     

    Definitions

    Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

     

    What is roleplaying?:

    What is metagaming?:

    What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:

     

    In-Character Information
    Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

     

    Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)

    Character’s sex: (male or female?)

    Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)

    Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)

    Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

    Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)

    Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)

    Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)

    Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)

    Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)

    Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

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    This application is now denied as the applicant failed to apply the changes asked for.

    You may reapply in 12 hours starting from now! If there are any questions or concerns feel free to send me a forum message!

     

     

    -The following changes were not done-

     

    • Your biography is a bit messy, it needs to be more coherent. One example is this quote
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    The boys and the bleeding man lay in the snow for a while.
    That night his mother came into his room and said downstairs now!

     It jumps from the two boys and the bleeding man laying in the cold snow to being home. As a reader I would like to know what happened between from when they laid there and got home!

     

    • I need you and this is important, to use punctuation. It hard to read without proper punctuation and some grammar correction.
    • I want you to try balance the pros and cons for your character. He has a lot of things he is good at but his faults are not that many to balance it out. We all have flaws and I feel the three you listed are not enough compared to the strengths you listed.

     

    Now as I mentioned you can message me through the forums if you got any questions or concerns!

    You will have 24 hours to correct the three changes that I asked of you or the application will be denied should the changes not be made. 

    Good luck! :)

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    You know, really enjoyed this story that Derek has been through. It was different, original and has authenticity to it. This application is very much accepted! A GM will implement this application soon! I will follow up by doing the tutorial with you and if you have any questions you can send me a forum message or bring it up when I show you the tutorial area!

    Meanwhile you could browse the wiki or hang on the forums!

    ThatOneFatGuy, welcome to lord of the craft!

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    Aaaaand accepted, of course! Lovely application to read and well made! I will list some links for you as well as explain them further down this response for you! A GM will shortly implement the application to add you onto the whitelist. I will also try to reach you in-game to go through the tutorial area to get you started on this promising adventure!

    Feel free to browse the wiki while you wait and PM me with any questions!

    The link below takes you to the wiki!
    The way time is measured is that one real life week is equal to one year in-game.

    Time and date

     

    Ads for the combat PM me with the question!

     

    Without any more delay.

    Medvekoma, welcome to lord of the craft!

  10. Hello! You should contact any GM to have your old account taken off the whitelist to start with!

     

    As for the new account, simply make an alt account application and it will be dealt with as soon as possible and just leave your accepted app as a notice at the bottom or such.

    Use this format! at this link: Alt application

    Hope this helps!

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    Aha, so hello there! After putting on my Sherlock hat and investigating it seems that you are applying for each time you change your characters name! You need not to do this, my apologies  for having to wait so long for your application to be looked at! The change is of course accepted and in the future you do not need to apply for when you change the mc name! 

    Have fun and enjoy! :)

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    Hi there! A lovely read and super exciting what this might bring! Accepted! The application will be handled by a GM and implemented shortly! If it is required you simply throw me a message with any questions and if there is a need we could go through the tutorial to get you going!

    Feel free to roam the forums for any shenanigans going on there while you wait!

    MysticRoamer, welcome to Lord of the Craft!

  13. 8 minutes ago, Jonificus said:

    What kind of event would you like to see?: world eating worm Slowly approaching ice age

     

    Would you rather see the descendants pushed off our current land, or giving incentive to move themselves?: Incentive

     

    If you want to be pushed off, how so? If you want incentive, what would that be?: The discovery of warmer, fertile lands leading the descendants to colonize the new new new new new new new new new new world.

    How should we travel to the next map (boat, portal, etc)?: Boats I suppose, or whatever the races figure out will be the best way to escape the frozen seas and landss

    This sounds like something nice, the whole end of the world thing with dark stuff is a bit dull!

     

    Basically something that is more slow but equally dangerous and not like some overlord or dragon.

    Would also want to see fragments of the old map, small landmasses available for example (ice age scenario) then you would be able to discover remnants of the old world, the massive trees of wood elf forest, frozen in time and only the top of the tree visible.

     

     

    10 minutes ago, Jonificus said:

    What kind of event would you like to see?: world eating worm Slowly approaching ice age

    Hah, sounds lovely too!

  14. 16 minutes ago, Tox said:

    Seems like anyone who disagrees just doesn't want to see their pixels poof. I see it as a better alternative than 40 flays running around abusing defender default making it so you have to pvp and just walking off with inventory's full of stuff type raids.

    Not at all about pixel poof. It's about player interaction, when you have a possible villain situation were only one part are able to have enjoyable RP then there's a problem. I doubt many find it fun to discover possessions gone with the inability to follow up on it. If this were a thing where both villain and victim could receive interesting RP then go for it. Staff moderation will not change the fact that the victim will have very little to do. 

  15. 21 minutes ago, Wrynntastic. said:

    Yeah; Again I mentioned this in my last response. Since the GMs are heavily involved, we're going to try and make so the defenders do have a chance, and are able to get rp out of it. We would be able to change things about times etc that the attackers have submitted. This will allow us to give the defenders the best possible chance to keep their stuff, and also perhaps get some rp out of it.

    Hm I feel this will not bring joy to the majority of the audience involved and I simply feel it is too much of a system aimed to benefit the actors not victims. In theory it would be fun but in practice it has too much room for OOC drama to erupt even with what you say, GM moderating.

     

    Why not make a staff sponsored instance that players could attempt to heist rather than having it be on the expense of players? That or make players consent to it or be put on a list that accepts heists. I am sure people will argue that it is not RP friendly but I'm convinced that it benefits the heisters not the victim.

     

     

  16. 38 minutes ago, Wrynntastic. said:

     

     

    So, yep~ These are all really good points. Firstly I'll respond to Pess and work from there!

     

    So- the heist system is heavily GM involved, and of course it's a good point that this sytem shouldn't become another way to just become OOC abuse. Since the system is heavily GM inolved, we make sure that the attackers have thought through what they're going to do, and they haven't just came up and said "yolo, doing a heist 420, cause i h8 dis person." The communication between GMs and Players is vital. 

    I meant what Tehlulu also mentioned, heists looks like a one way communication as in the victim will not be online or not there most likely. So it only benefits the heisters while the victim doesn't get..any RP really other than what I mentioned, having to deal with the negatives.

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