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  1. Hm, much to read. 

    This is a close resemblance to the Fjarriauga, a mix of Frost witch and Witcher 3 vampires?
    I'm going to point some things out below.

     

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    Greater strigae are unkillable under most circumstances. While their bodies can be totally incapacitated in much the same manner as would a normal humanoid (Rapid dismemberment, beheading) and destroyed through destruction of the brain, ‘death’ in this fashion only serves to destroy the corporeal body and banish the spirit from this plane. With enough time and the aid of another striga’s blood, a greater striga may regenerate a new body, identical to the last.

    Could we there be some light on this? Will they remember the situation or have memory loss as to why they got struck down?

     

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    Firstly, a greater striga appears paler than average, though not necessarily unnaturally so or to a degree that appears unhealthy or abnormal such as albinism. Secondly, the canine teeth are slightly pointed and elongated into tiny fangs, however this is usually hidden by a closed mouth. Thirdly, the iris of a striga’s eye is always a yellow-green colour - however, again, this is not necessarily unnatural among many mortals. Finally, a striga who has not fed on blood for a considerable amount of time feels cold to the to the touch.

    This is a frost witch but a male counterpart and without the bad traits that comes to having sharp teeth for example or the other weaknesses.

     

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    Strigae are compelled to feed on blood, hungering for it like a powerful addiction. Though this ‘alcoholism’ can occasionally be overcome by the most controlled of strigae, it is always latent.

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    Strigae who have not fed on blood for an extended period of the time are cold to the touch and usually significant weaker in combat than those who have.

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    Greater strigae who overindulge on blood risk devolution into one of the many forms of lesser striga.

     

    These are not weaknesses, these are merely what "could" happen but this isn't going to be moderated so I wouldn't count them as a weakness. They can be "ignored".

     

     

     

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    Many animals with developed senses of smell, hounds especially, are able to detect the scent of a striga and are averse to one’s presence.

    I might have missed it, but is this the only counter for a Striga in non bestial form? If so then it's once more way too strong.

     

     

     

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    Strigae are completely unable to learn and utilize magical skills as a result of their affliction. Prior magical skills that were learnt prior to transformation become unusable.

    This is basically the only drawback I can see in this but they're still going to be tremendously strong.

     

     

    • There's nothing unique with these in terms of bad traits that comes to it and much too close to something that already exists. Unoriginal on many points, a mash-up of everything.
    • It's not going to be a curse that's spread to people interested like witches do, I feel this will end up as a cult.
    • Vampires is something that has been suggested many times before.
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    This application is approved, thumbs up! You put effort into this which is fun to see!

    You will be implemented soon so that you can play and once ingame I will try to contact you so to get you started with the tutorial and some chat practice! Welcome to Lord of the Craft friend!

    In regards to the rule that you had a question about it basically means that if you have two characters that are in the same general area they can not influence each others so that it doesn't create any advantages.

     

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    I must deny this application. There's simply not enough for me to review the application to even put it on pending. You must remember that the application serves as test to show that you can tell a story in-game and provide fun. You one lines the biography, I have nothing to work on to see that you can create a story.

    You can re-apply again in 24 hours with a more fleshed out application and you can send me a forum message at any time if you want to talk about this.

    See you then perhaps!

  4. Just now, Tsuyose said:

    I never said it was just your fault, I'll take equal blame albeit wasn't primarily me-- there were other participants. I made you into a meme? That was a collective effort by a majority of folk within the actual chat. But, alright. Nevertheless, we'll see, perhaps you'll prove me wrong,  and if you do, I'll be more than happy to support your application.

     

    (My negative experiences with you stem from the days of Hanna/you/Dan. Not due to the ordeal with them, but how you treated me.) 

    Agreed with the first part, but yes we've not seen eye to eye many times and to be honest there is a lingering distaste that sits due to past stuff. I can fully understand that, one usually keeps the same idea of a person until proven else. I can not fully say I know how to prove you wrong, we're not in the same areas of RP or staff positions. I can only try and show that I've changed and not "Complaining for the sake of complaining" like I clearly remember you pointed out in the red rose chat! Ever since joining the AT i've felt much more secure and willing to do good, I hope this view of me can change!

     

     

    3 minutes ago, Pess said:

    I have the screenshots about the things you said about me, made me into a meme just because YOU did not like me.

    Poorly worded, I was hinting that there was a bandwagon that occurred and it was said "If Pess it taught I will teach drfate". That was it really.

  5. 3 minutes ago, Nolan said:

    I have to agree with Draeris on a lot of what he said, I feel like you wouldn't be entirely fair when hiding/moderating things on the forums and you seem, at least to me, not to take criticism well and can't remain neutral to people you may not entirely get along with. -1

    We've not had any recent interaction other than the AT chat, I would like to know what you base that i can not take criticism and can't remain neutral with people I do not agree with. There's people I do not agree with but I still work with them actively on the AT. 

  6. 6 minutes ago, Tsuyose said:

    Well, he wouldn't be the only one to stir the pot. I remember during the ordeal with the Necromancers and yourself a screenshot came by my way.

     

    "Yeah. Heard they cried like babies", or something akin to. The entirety of the chat saw that. I mean, I'm not really going to support this application. No personal beef with you or anything I've just had so much negative experiences with you it's unbelievable. Perhaps you could prove me wrong, though.

    To be fair Tsu you made a big fuss and said "Im going to back to lead the paladins" and you left the necromancer chat because i was learning Necromancy on Ceto. I have the screenshots about the things you said about me, made me into a meme just because YOU did not like me. You tried to start a train there but luckily for me it did not get anywhere. I've little against you as it is you who seeks these situations with me, I did not complain about you that you tried to have Atles rethink teaching me Necromancy. I suck it up and hoped the situation would cool down, which it did. You know well enough why we do not get along Tsuyose and that particular situation I will not bring up in public, but know that it was not well handled from either sides.

  7. 2 minutes ago, Publius said:

    This doesn't really address any points tbh

     

    would be nice to see the people already on the fm team making sure that this stays subjective and not get messy, well written btw, just wish there was a bit more meat to it

    I know, I am as I am writing this talking to Drae in skype about this. I felt no need to have a public argument about it! Don't worry!

  8. 17 minutes ago, Draeris said:

    In my experience Pess has been an uncooperative and impulsive girl, making decisions without much thinking only to never back away from again. Despite her polite presentation and flawless communication skills, which I'm sure makes her a great AT member, the fact that she's still mentioning the burning of Vittoria back in the Fringe as a reason to never trust Person X and Y simply shows she can't properly let go of things.

     

    With the forums so turbulent lately, especially with the WC drama's that this time involves me, I cannot see her act objectively when locking posts or removing comments. She simply does not forgive and forget, which reflects in everything she does or says for the rest of her time here on LotC. I wouldn't trust her to oversee my posts objectively, which makes me -1 this application.

     

    Pess, you've had your chill moments and in general there's nothing wrong with you, but this re-occurring trait alone makes me believe you simply aren't cut for FM. With Applications you deal with new players, clean slates. On the forums; everyone has a track record, one that could've easily influenced you in your would-be decisions as FM.

    I will tell you what i just told you in skype.

    This whole drama could have been averted if you only had the pride to step back and realize "Okay these people are upset so I should probably make peace and not stir it up" but you did not. You persisted to be a thorn in their side, fuelling the drama. Disdainful.

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    Hi there!

    So there's something I would like to mention before we get going.

    The current date is 1564 so she would be older than what you posted in the app, and the bio would be off.

    You can either change the age of the character or you could rewrite the biography to fit the current date.

     

    Send me a PM if you want with how you want to do this, you will have 24 hours to do the changes needed or it will be denied.

     

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