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Kalehart

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  1. 12 minutes ago, Sister Sequoia said:

    you're literally lying out your ass, he wanted nothing to do with you because you were insufferable, and you still are.

    I was there and closely involved at the time that this was going on and can personally confirm that he is telling the truth. We were all too young to realize what was going on back then, but Vardak and DecoLamb did some despicable shit and I'm ashamed to say that I stood by while it happened because I didn't realize how bad it was.

     

    It's pretty deplorable to claim someone who has faced this kind of hardship is lying just because you choose to take the accused's word over their own. Tentoa's anger at Vardak is wholly justified given what he has done and what he stood by, and whether Tentoa's actions in response were right or not, it makes no difference to what Vardak did himself.

     

    This is gross.

  2. Hey there! I'm glad to see you coming up with ideas and looking for ways to start developing content on the server, the enthusiasm is certainly welcome. I do need to explain a few things to you, but please keep in mind that I do want to encourage your desire to start working within the server's setting and developing your own ideas for it. Don't give up!

     

    The main thing here is that this isn’t a post we would qualify as acceptable lore, as all lore follows formats found here. Since you're trying to work on the concept still and get some help for it, I don't want to just deny it as normally we would, but this isn't really the place to put incomplete ideas and submissions.

     

    This would fit better in the  Creative Writing subforum since you're looking for ideas, so I'm going to go ahead and move it there for now. Again normally we'd deny a post like this in this section, just so you're aware, but I'm happy to move it this time instead. Once you have it more complete, and adapt it to a suitable format, you could make a new post in Lore Submissions for it.

     

    A few notes on the actual content, however, to give you some input!

     

    -You need to be careful about involving the server's nations in your stories, as they are active communities of real players performing actions in roleplay- using Oren as an antagonist doesn't quite work, as it isn't reflective of anything that they as a group have actually done through real roleplay. You'd be better creating some less specific or made-up faction for it. Basically, these nations are real, so you can't say they've done things that they haven't, if that makes sense.

     

    -Muskets do not exist on the server, as we abide by what we call a 'techlock' basically limiting the level of technology that is allowed within the setting. Archers or crossbowmen are possible, but we don't allow any sort of gun to be used on the server or in its setting for stories.

     

    -Poisons don't exist as you might think of them, simply due to being hard to make fair. There are certain alchemical potions or special materials and other such things that have poison-like effects, but nothing quite like a deadly poison you might imagine. You'll need to account for that if you intend to write a poison-like effect for these.

     

    Best of luck in developing this idea, and welcome to the server! I hope to encounter you in-game sometime in the future. Unfortunately I don't have any name suggestions, but I'm sure the right one will come to you!

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