Sunlorn

Need someone to make me a high quality shaded skin with clothes, face, and all! Willing to pay as much mina as it would take to satisfy the requirements. Could even consider paying some real world money, but I'm quite broke. If you’re a skinner looking for some clientele, then PM me with your discord so I can send you some reference pics and ask you for your price.

[!] A poem has been scattered around the towns of the human nations, pinned to walls and littering the floors [!] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ U ncrowned & D rowned ------------{+}------------ T here are many both dark and regal With infinite renown It’s a shame that all those equal Will never have a crown K ingship’s failing mateys And it’s time to take a stand Take up your allegiances And bury them in the sand! T here’s no need to slaughter No cause to tear the land Hold out all your papers And burn them to the ground! K eeping states deceitful Is the enemy’s number one Too many a harmless people Never rise to a morning sun T hey slave away at darkness To satiate a gluttonous lord Avarice sin incarnate Purloins into his hoard K nights so fair in judgment Joust in a child’s dream In truth it seems so pungent As they scheme in the regime T here are many both dark and regal With infinite renown It’s a shame that all those equal Will never have a crown ------------{+}------------ Signed By the Remarkably Inscrutable Insense “Sauge” Parlant

S inful T hing ------------{+}------------ O nce upon a fine old evening, A lovely, brilliant light that’s cleaving! But so, it seems the heart so dark Demeans all those with bite and bark! With rock, with fist, with words of hate! T he sloth and gluttony, it slept and ate Want cake and more, than it could take This vile creature stole from reserves Of kinfolk, family, oh the nerve! W retched being, truly so, Spits out fire, lies they stoked! Words of poison, venomous, cloaked Trust but the vigil of those it broke! A word of caution, A word of hope From those who care, And curse its dope! ------------{+}------------ Signed By the Illustrious, Devilish, and Mysterious, Insense “Sauge” Parlant

Hello Aquaquean, I tried to implement the changes you requested to the best of my ability, but I’d like to clarify two things: The part of “...disrupting the four great elements” is purely hyperbole, and not literal. Just an over exaggeration for the sake of comedy, but I did remove it since it may have been confusing. Additionally, “Coun-Vean-Eine-Ance” is another joke, as it’s meant to a tongue-in-cheek reference to “convenience”. Hence, his ideals and actions change for “convenience”. Also, I apologize for not clarifying that the character is not actually cursed nor magical. Him being a “curse” is just a piece of deprecating humor. I meant to convey that the word “cursed” is being used similarly to how someone may say that the streets of New York City are “cursed” with traffic. However, in the aim of reaching clarity I removed that as well. He’s also human, as stated in the Character Race section below the biography, and I changed most instances of the words “being” and “creature” to “person” or “him” to better clarify his race. The aim of my character is that he is equivalent to the poor comedy relief characters often seen in sitcoms, so if there’s anything that might indicate him possessing a serious power/advantage, it’s most likely not the case. I tried to adhere to your comments as best as I can, so please notify me if there’s anything more you’d like me to do, or if you’d just prefer me to scrap the whole backstory and write it in an extremely straightforward manner. I personally would prefer not to have to do so, as it could detract from the main theme of the character, but if you deem it necessary, then I will do so. Thank you, Ghostnn