BurnItWithWater

[ MC Name: BurnItWithWater]What is your name? Saerion ThunderfallWhere do you live? Kal'AkashWhat are your primary skills? Alchemy, Short biography (5+ sentences): In the year of 1441 I was born in Kal'Agnar. I was raised by my mother and father alongside my twin, Taerion. I looked up to my mother who was a great alchemist, while my brother looked up to our father. During 1511 my parents were slaughtered in the Dwarf-Orc War. I vowed to train to become the best Alchemist I could, to make my mother proud. In 1513 we boarded a boat to the land of Vailor. Upon the boat I met a boy named Razethion, who had lost his parents as well, so I took him under my wing and eventually adopted him.. I've found my way to the dwarven capital with my son and brother, to find my true family and clan, the Ironguts.How are you related to the Irongut Clan? (See family tree, don't create your own father or mother unless you PM Jordan1921): Son of Hordam, counsin of Fariken. Do you swear loyalty to the Irongut Clan Father?: YesOOCDo you agree to follow all the rules of the Irongut Clan? YesSkype name? (optional, you can also send it through PM if required) BurnItWithWater

Out-Of-Character Information What’s your Minecraft account name?: BurnItWithWater How old are you?: 16 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No hostility or toxicness being tolerated at all Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Through friends Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None Definitions What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is acting out a specific role or character in lore, and interacting in situations with other roleplaying people (characters) What is metagaming?: Using out of character in character, thus breaking the laws of roleplay What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Controlling role play, forcing actions on other people and controlling the outcome of situations. Example: Instead of "attempts to kick", someone may put "kicks in head and knocks out". In-Character Information Character’s name: Saerion Thunderfall Character’s sex: Male Character’s race: Cavern Dwarf Character’s age: 104 Biography: (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Saerion Thunderfall and his twin Taerion were born in the year 1480 in the city of Kal'Agnar in Athera to Hordam & Befaes Thunderfall. They grew up in a city being rebuilt, and both looked up to their parents, their mother an alchemist and their father a great warrior. Saerion wished to follow in his mothers footsteps and began training as an alchemist. In the year of 1511, his parents fought in the OrcDwarf war and died, leading to him having a hatred for all Orcs. When the war ended in 1513, Saerion and Taerion boarded a boat when Athera started being destroyed by a giant worm, headed towards the isles of Vailor. Upon the boat, Saerion met a young orphan by the name of Razetheion, and took him under his wing, teaching him the ways of Alchemy. The brothers met some other dwarves aboard the boat, and when they reached land, they set off together towards the Dwarven capital Kal'Akash, where they decided to live. Saerion spent a lot of time brewing, and went on many expeditions for ingredients, traveling all over the land. In the year 1522, the two brothers defended Kal'Akash against unknown entities, and have lived there since. Personality Traits: He is shy but kind and will do anything for his friends, and is outgoing. Ambitions: He aspires to be a great alchemist and follow in his mothers footsteps Strengths/Talents: He is very skilled as an alchemist and can tell fairly well when people are lying Weaknesses/Inabilities: Easily angered if someone threatens his friends, become easily distracted Appearance: 4 foot 6, with brown hair and dark blue eyes, wearing fine robes with plenty of pockets to carry ingredients Skin: http://imgur.com/a/neY2i

My old application and account got deleted, and I'm hoping I don't have to rewrite the whole thing, but here's the basics. If I do have to rewrite the whole thing just tell me. Mine was put in pending and I was told to fix my age, which I did, I was 74, lengthen my biography, which I did, made it 2 paragraphs, including dates and locations of my travels. Lastly I was told to change my character personality, so I made him shy, but loyal and kind to his friends. He was a dwarf born in Athera who moved to Vailor and adopted another dwarf on the way. He's working as an alchemist in Kal'Akash currently. The person who put it in pending had a mountain with a person on top with a blue sky background as their picture, but I can't remember their username. My IGN is BurnItWithWater.