SoulReapingWolf

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

Hey so first of all super excited you are choosing a dwarf for your first character. Ill help you out with this application so you will be playing in no time!

• So first of all your powergaming definition is not quite right! Please use the following link to get an accurate idea of the concept and use an example to show your undestanding!
  • Powergaming
• I love the creativity you have in your biography but I am afraid that you can’t be a descendant of the first cave dwarfs as your character, also Herobrine is not a part of our server’s lore so he can’t take place in your backstory. (Also relinquishing the Brathmordakin will make your dwarf a bit of a heretic in the community but that is up to you!) Make sure you use a real clan in your Bio too, please!
  • Okay so before I give you some useful lore links I wanted to mention that time in the server goes a little bit different from real life, so each week your character will age one year (So if you want to lower your age or keep it like that then that is alright)
    • Dwarf Wiki
      • Cave Dwarves
      • Forest Dwarves
      • Mountain Dwarves
      • Dark Dwarves
    • Dwarf Kingdom
    • Dwarf Religion
    • Dwarven Clans
    • Creatures
    • Flora
• Make sure in your description you use it to describe your character’s appearance
• Your interesting facts need to be complete sentences (and remove Herobrine from them)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

I am happy to inform you that you’ve been

Your journey has only begun, adventure awaits in the lands of Arcas!

If you have any other questions feel free to message me through the forums or discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul)#1674, you can also join our New Player Discord, where you can talk and ask questions to other players from the server. If you have any doubts on how the server works make sure you use our New Player Guide! this guide is filled with tons of useful information to help you understand the server during your newcomer stage. Upon your arrival to Arcas, the monks from Cloud Temple will be there to guide you towards your desired destiny.

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Despite your application being really close to being instantly accepted I suggest you add at least an additional piece of lore different to locations, the following links can prove useful.
  • Human Wiki
  • Human Empire
  • Human Religion
  • Creatures
  • Flora

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• You should use an example for each definition, it shows an understanding of the concepts!
  • Metagaming
  • Powergaming
• Please make sure your biography is at least seven complete sentences long, and add at least two pieces of lore from the server.
  • Human Wiki
  • Human Empire
  • Human Religion
  • Creatures
  • Flora
• Make sure you use the space in the description to write about your character’s physical characteristics, describe your character the way you picture him in your head
• Make sure one of your interesting facts is negative (A weakness, fear, flaw)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are good but could use some more work. I suggest adding examples to prove your understanding of the concept. The following links could prove useful in this task.
  • Metagaming
  • Powergaming
• Your biography is good but it needs some work, for example, due to your age and the mention of holm there is a time incongruency in your app, you could not be alive during the time of that city with the age you mention in your application. Also, Bjor Cottonwood is not the king of forest dwarfs, he is a high chief of the forest dwarf village. Also please avoid killing sprees in your app. Make sure you replace them, the following links will prove useful.
  • Dwarven Kingdom
  • Dwarven Religion
  • Forest Dwarfs
  • LoTC Calendar
• You have written down that you are a dwarf, please choose a subrace as they are very different.
  • Dark Dwarves
  • Mountain Dwarves
  • Cave Dwarves
  • Forest Dwarves
• Your description could use some expansion, please make sure you describe the character the same way you picture him in your head.
• Your interesting facts could use complete sentences
• Your skin does not fit your character’s description please fix this, the following link can help you out to get a skin!
  • Skin Archive

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve failed to make corrections within the time limit given. Please take into consideration the comments made while making the next application!

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

Things that needed fixing were told to the player due to his presence in the server
 

I am happy to inform you that you’ve been

Your journey has only begun, adventure awaits in the lands of Arcas!

If you have any other questions feel free to message me through the forums or discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul)#1674, you can also join our New Player Discord, where you can talk and ask questions to other players from the server. If you have any doubts on how the server works make sure you use our New Player Guide! this guide is filled with tons of useful information to help you understand the server during your newcomer stage. Upon your arrival to Arcas, the monks from Cloud Temple will be there to guide you towards your desired destiny.

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Your definitions on powergaming and metagaming need some work, please expand them a bit so they are clear and add a small example of a scenario so it shows your understanding of the concepts. The following links will help you with this task.
  • Powergaming
  • Metagaming
• Please make sure you use appropriate server lore in your bio, adding at least two pieces of server lore either from snow elves or global LoTC lore. Make sure your bio is at least seven complete sentences long. The following links will prove useful in this task.
  • Snow Elf Wiki
  • Snow Elves Forum Section
  • Creatures
  • Flora
• Make sure in your description you tell us how your character looks like, use this space to try and let us see him the way you picture him in your head.
• Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following structure 
  • Negative interesting fact (Fears, Trauma, Weaknesses)
  • Neutral interesting fact (Likes, hobbies, passive personal traits)
  • Positive interesting fact (Skills, Training, Strengths) 
• Your character’s skin doesn't fit the race you want to play, you can get a skin from the following link. 
  • Skin Archive

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours
If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Please expand your metagaming definition and use an example you understand the concept.
  • Metagaming
• Please expand your biography and use at least two pieces of lore different to names of locations (Can be human religion, names from the empire, creatures and other lore information)
  • Human Wiki
  • Human Empire
  • Human Religion
  • Creatures
  • Flora
• Make sure you make your description a bit longer, adding details so we can picture your character the way you imagine him in your head!
• Make sure you make your interesting facts complete sentences!

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.